Reviews for A Heart of Mesquite
AnnalenaMarvelgirl chapter 17 . 6/1
I need to stop reading this at like midnight
Lokielle1215119 chapter 8 . 11/27/2019
I just wanna hug Loki right now and give him a huge cuddle and comfort him and tell I'll be there for him no matter what and those who ever hurt him in any manner would suffer my wrath.TДT)
Loki Joker Quinn Jr chapter 17 . 11/6/2019
Haha I had PTSD from efing 2yrs old rip me haha I’m so mentally screwed hence why I love Loki where both adopted and got serious issues lol
SilverDragon1218 chapter 34 . 9/15/2019
Love this!
Midnite Girl chapter 19 . 8/7/2019
Years late to the party, but no matter how secure you believe a room is, no surveillance, you don't leave a young child alone on a helicarrier, with no supervision. Phil dropped the ball on this.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 6/13/2019
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
DragonGrrl654 chapter 6 . 5/23/2019
This is basically a perfect expression of how I imagine Loki's thought process would have been as a young kid (psychological trauma and affection starvation included). It's well written and interesting and basically indulges everything (as a devout Loki fan, both from the MCU and the comics) I love about his character.
PadawanSkywalker chapter 6 . 4/10/2019
This is amazing! You'll probably never see this, but I am loving it so far! Aww, poor Loki! He thinks everything's his fault! :(
Suzy P chapter 34 . 3/7/2019
I thought this looked to be a promising story so I began reading. The idea was good, but I felt the story lacked depth and some of the characters were just not right.
You mentioned that you had not seen the Thor movie, hence why things were not quite right. Even without seeing the movie, in Norse mythology Sif is not on great terms with Loki.
The ending was rushed and there were silly mistakes, that showed either bad or no proof reading.
I don’t normally give bad reviews, but I felt I had to. I don’t mean to offend and I commend you for putting ideas to paper, but please just do back research and proof read. Don’t rush an ending just to finish the story. You have great potential just waiting to be tapped.
Loveanimelove chapter 12 . 2/15/2019
My pets do that to
Guest chapter 18 . 2/9/2019
If that person in the doorway does anything to physically or mentally hurt Loki, I will throw my phone into a wall not even kidding. Who on there right mind would hurt a child, frost giant or not, you do not hurt a child in any way.
Philosophical quetzalcoatl chapter 34 . 6/10/2018
soft and fluffy my ass you cruel yet amazing author
Agent blue rose chapter 31 . 6/3/2018
DAMN DARCY YOU ON A ROLL. BLESS THE SACRED TASER
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ongjulynn17 chapter 20 . 12/24/2017
Tell your friend that I give her my thanks and a bucket of chocolate chip cookies

Cause if you killed off my poor cinnamon bun my heart would've imploded
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