When's the next chapter coming out?

What will happened next? I enjoyed the story

While a bit extreme, Mark's reaction is quite understandable, given the circumstances. Still, hopefully Jen can convince him that 'Henry' is currently Richard, then maybe they'll finally figure out a way to get Castiel back and stop Henry for good.

Can't wait for Chapter 29!

Nice update. It's got to be a bit disturbing for Richard to see his own death from Henry's point of view. Hopefully he's still in control. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

I loved it! Kinda figured Henry would bring along a demon. And with Richard possessing him now, it's probably the only genuinely kind smile that has ever come out of that face. I'd love to see Mark and Connie's reaction (Connie especially) to this. That is, if Richard can keep control of Henry long enough.

Thanks! And you're very welcome. Glad to see you're making progress with this story. Wish I could say the same with A New Divide.

Mark may have something to worry about, since Henry has had at least a basic knowledge of the supernatural for years now, and has some demon 'allies'. Plus, what happened to Jack is currently an unknown. Very interested in seeing where you take this.

Can't wait for Part 2!

I had a listen to 'O Willow Waly' on YouTube. Creepy. I can definitely imagine Henry singing it, too.

Awesome. This keeps on getting better. I can't wait to see what happens next - it ought to be very interesting. And why do I get the sneaking suspicion that Henry isn't going to keep up his end of the deal?

Fantastic! Great appearance by Richard, and I was hoping Jen would come back. Will Richard appear again in the next chapter?

Keep up the good work, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment.

Very good job. You've got me waiting to see what happens next, and whether or not Jen's death is permanent. After all, dying is by no means the end of a character in Supernatural. Good inclusion of the church, and the flashback as well. Just like Henry to do what he did, too. The words 'sick puppy' don't even begin to describe him, and getting resurrected by demons certainly can't help, either.

Hopefully Mark doesn't get blinded by rage over Jen's death and charge right into one of Henry's traps.

If you want, I can PM an idea or two for a future chapter.

Keep going!

Good job and once again, its' good to see you back. Castiel's in trouble, that's for sure, but no matter how bad it gets for him, he always comes back. And whatever Henry does next, it definitely won't be good. Now Mark, Jen, and Connie have to figure out what to do next, and without Cas, for added difficulty.

Looking forward to Chapter 22.

Great to see you back! And quite a return, too. Looks like things are about to escalate in a whole new way now that Henry's had his first lesson in the world of the supernatural.

I definitely enjoyed it. Score one more for Richard's ghost. Henry deserves to be driven insane. Awesome job with the nightmare sequence! One of my favorites from this story, and definitely the creepiest.

As for Mark's temper toward Cas, have Connie try to calm him down, and be a bit less hostile, if only so the angel doesn't throw him into a wall again. And if Henry found out about Jen's pregnancy, that would definitely make things interesting, to say the least.

Indeed, writer's block does suck. One positive thing about it, though, is it gives you more time to think the plotline through.

Looking forward to more, and I can't wait to see what you've got in store for the ending.

Excellent! You've outdone yourself once again, it's my favorite chapter yet. I'm wondering now what Cas is going to do for Jen. I guess I'll just have to wait and see, huh?

Looking forward to Chapter 19.

Excellent chapter. I daresay my favorite yet.

Henry wasn't expecting Cas to be there as Jen's literal guardian angel. He definitely wasn't expecting to get thrown like a rag doll, either.

And Mark burning down Henry's house, well, there's a saying for that: "What goes around, comes around." Karma, in other words. Henry had it coming. 'Heating up' indeed.

I have a feeling that things are going to get very interesting from here on out.

Looking forward to Chapter 18.

Seems like Henry's slowly going mad (as if he wasn't mental already) from all these dreams. Eventually, it might end up that he can't sleep at all, and truly goes insane. But it won't matter, because Richard's ghost isn't constrained by dreams. And good job with the dream sequence; I like how Henry got a taste of his own medicine. Turnabout's fair play.

Classic Cas in here, looking out for others. Henry's probably going to get a rude surprise if he tries to go after either of them now. He's not expecting Jen to have a literal guardian angel.

Keep it coming. I'm liking where this is going.