Awww so cute!

I think this was a cute story

This is sad...my feels broke down /3 :( Good job on the writing though! I look forward to an update!

Whenever you can/want to please update this? It's an interesting concept o would love reading more of! If you can't/don't want to that's fine, your story, your choice ~ :)

You must continue this story. This is one of the most heartbreaking One Piece stories I have ever read. It a sad to see how Ace lives, and Luffy is too innocent and naive to realize anything. I swear this story could actually bring most to tears.

Zoro, Nami, Usopp, Chopper, Sanji...they are all made up.. That's one of the saddest parts of this story. It's all just his imagination. Please continue this beautiful piece of a story.

-Keke

Oh my gosh... Poor Luffy... ;( Will something happen in real life that will change him somehow? You know, like his made-up characters turn out to actually be real? Please update soon! :)

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY!
I love how Ace acts towards Luffy and I love Luffy as a child cuz he's just so goddamn cute and I hate Luffy's and Ace's parents.

I LOVE THIS PLOT! PLZ update soon! Also, it'll be great if you could make Luffy meet all his friends in real life. Update soon!

I have no idea where the story's supposed to go, but the idea is really interesting!

Oh don't worry it's not like I needed my heart... But I do have to say this is beyond words. I am truly impressed by your writing.

Ace and Luffy are adorable. Please update soon?

:) this is cute.

I already really like it! great work!

another great chapter, so cute with ace and luffy. I rly hope he doesn't die, it was so sad when he did

This is such an original cnocept, I can't wait to see where you go with it! Update soon!

How cute! I really enjoyed this story, and I hope you'll continue this and update soon(though it was just posted). The idea of his pirating life being completely Luffy's imaginating is quite entertaining, and I can't wait to see what will happen next!