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I was rereading your story cause I genuinely like it a lot when I first read it. And honestly the passive aggressiveness of that “teacher” leaving that comment was uncalled for. You did the best you could and honestly the story was still really good and while there are ways to improve anything she didn’t have to be so rude and agressive about it. (Keep up the great work in anything you do!)

I love this story and I hope you are doing or have done a sequel. I'd love to read about harry/sebastian and Blake's wedding and the little baby. I'd also love to see if harry/sebastian and his father are able to everything out in the end and I hope all this 'elders' information comes out to so that harry/sebastian can understand why his father couldn't be with him when he needed him. I hope Sirius and lily will stay by harry/sebastian side and hopefully remus appears in the story too. But anyway getting back to what I was originally saying I LOVE THIS STORY.

I loved this story and I hope you have or are doing a sequel cause I'd love to read about harry/sebastian and Blake's wedding and the little baby. I'd love to see what happens between harry/sebastian and his father... hopefully they can sort things out and all of this 'elders' information will come out so he can understand why his father left him alone all that time... hopefully remus will show up in the story some time and Sirius and lily stick by harry/sebastian. But anyway back to what I was saying originally I LOVE THIS STORY!

I would like to ask you if Abraxan is a horse, how can it have an egg?

Great story! I discovered it 2 hours ago and I’m already done.

NO. Definitely no threesome. Also no story. I’m sorry but this is far too random and power-up-Harry with no real plot.

I like your stories mate

hola en lo personal me gustó mucho la historia.
realmente me gustaría que la siguieras porfavor.

Please don't stop! I just found your stuff and I'm loving it!

Well, I quite enjoyed this story. If you want to rewrite it, cool, but I dont think it needs it. At most, maybe remove the 2 author note chapters in the middle?

Sequel. I had enjoyed the story

I enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing it.

Okay, first off your story is only mediocre. You have spelling issues, grammar issues, and don’t even get me started on the misuse of tenses. It’s like an elementary school child has written this story, and the only reason I’ve gotten as far as I have is due to boredom. That, and the fact that as a teacher, I’m used to reading mindless dribble. However, this boo hoo, woe is me crap has given me even less respect for you as an author than I already had. Between this chapter and chapter 15, what’s the point of the rest of the story? You have plot holes the size of Texas, you’re rushing through a story and leaving out major details, focusing on details that are so minuscule they’re a waste of the readers time. I usually don’t leave reviews, but the “no one is reviewing my work, so I’m not going to write” bull crap is ridiculous. Honestly, they’re not reading and reviewing it, because you aren’t producing anything worth reading and reviewing.

Don’t listen to these hateful people. Everybody can always use some improve but if they are not here to give you helpful criticism then their opinion doesn’t matter. I like this story and I think the sexual scenes are amazing. Keep doing what your doing. :)