Thats how I always wanted Oliver to say I love you to her for the first time. to you I got to play it out in my head :D :D
I really liked the whole thing. You stayed true to the characters... Beginning was better than the end tho characterwise... don't know why.. just a feeling but i enhoyed reading it. Thanks :) :)

I had fun readimg this. Great work! Thank you-! :)

So beautiful

This is so cutely adorable. I love hearing Oliver's uncertainty - how he is thinking about how difficult it will be around Felicity, now that she know the truth!

Absolutely amazing. I barely found you yesterday and I have not been able to stop reading your stories. They are so great, thank you.

Ugh. This killed me. You captured Oliver's voice so goddamn well... his mentality, his interactions, even how he expresses himself to his team. Beautifully written.

I enjoyed the hell out of this. You're a natural. Thanks!

i loved your short story. thank you for taking the time to write this. it was beautiful. we had action, face-off, revelation, and a happy ending - what more could any olicity reader want? lol

Very vivid and strong descriptions in this fic, I felt every emotion here, the intense argument and interaction between Oliver and Felicity in the foundry before going off to the abandoned church...the way he told her and her reaction, then his reaction as he jetted on his motorcycle...perfect perfect description of emotions there...then the heartfelt apology and exhange before oliver got caught - so so angsty and intense..

Well written, well done, and so glad you did write this and so glad that it was a beast and nice and long...and kudos to 'I'm so in love with you'...for a confession :) lol

Well done!

This was absolutely fantastic and you wrote both of them perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing:)

so much wonderfulness!

So good! I loved the part where she doesn't think he's serious when he says he loves her because, even if there were signs she would doubt tat it's true.

AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN, that's beautiful *-*

This was awesome!

That was too adorable and perfect. Can this be cannon! :)

this is soooo great. i think i cried a little on the inside when felicity told oliver she loved him and how happy he felt. so great :)