Great, well written story. I hope you continue to write for this fandom.

Fantastic story. I've read it feeling like watching an episode. Characters were so well written and the details you included in the story... Thank you for such a great work and if you ever plan on writing more, I'll surely be reading that too.

Love youre story!,
Thank you!

I'm so happy to have internet back again. Sad to see the end of this epic. Congrats on a brilliant story. Loved the cliffhangers. Hope to see more from you in the future.

Wonderful, Excellent, Magnificent story!

OH MY GOD YAY FINALLEEEEYYYYYYY! I've been waiting for this! I've been checking and checking coz I couldn't wait. :p :p Since you left the previous chapter with that heart-stopping cliffy. X(

So relieved that Riley was safe. I mean, I know that you wouldn't kill her off, but yea you get what I mean. XD

I love how the first word she uttered after she had just opened her eyes was "Gabriel". And then she freaked out instantly, since she assumed that Gabriel's dead. I also love how when she saw Griffin she was fuming so much I was like "whoa, gurl" XD Poor Griffin XD And Riley's happy and relieved tears OMG :')

Haha the nurse was so sweet. :p XD

My babies. Riley and Gabriel. Riliel. They had endured so much. *sniff* And they're alive, despite not in the best shape. It's gonna feel like hell for Riley since she had to wait 6 months until she could be back in the field, she's gonna hate the paperwork and sit-behind-the-desk.

LOL Griffin thinking that Riliel were sleeping together XDDDD It's not true but that part about their feelings for each other, yep. Right on the bullseye there, Griffin.

I also like Lillian & Griffin's convo. I agreed that she really should tell his superiors/the President how much Griffin had helped Gabriel. If Griffin wasn't there, who knows what would happen, so yea, that guy wasn't so bad. XD

Nawwww Jameson. I just love his character, and also Nelson's. I love their bromance and funny moments. WHY IS INTELLIGENCE CANCELLED SNIFFS. It could have been great! Also, I wish I could see more of Jameson, Nelson & Gabriel's bro moments. :'( Sigh. I can imagine an episode hinting at Jameson's past or whatever problem he was facing, and an episode where those 3 went out for bro moments and then those two teased Gabriel about Riley and all. AAGGHHHH! *sobs*

Anyway, continue with the review. Yep.

Gabriel immediately cut off Lillian and asking about Riley SDFGHJKL SO SWEET XDD Their convo was...interesting. There was so much grey areas. I mean, I can understand why Lillian/president/higher people said abort the mission, because Gabriel had the chip, who knows what would happen if it fell into the wrong hands. Terrible, horrible hands. But from Gabriel's view, and also part of Lillian of course, they wanted to go on with the mission and rescue Riley, she was their colleague, friend, (and to Gabriel, love of his life ;) ), and imagining what those a-holes were going to do to her, it's just too frightening for one's mind to take.

Griffin and Gabriel having a...bro moment?! LOL XD

It's so cute how he immediately chipped the hospital's record on Riley XD

FINALLY THE MOMENT WE'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR! RILIEL LAGFJKALHGALGJHAHJKL *_* :DDDDD XD I just... I CAN'T. TOO MUCH FEELS. *cry rivers* I love love love their convo! It's so sweet and frustrating at the same time XD Both of them didn't want each other to be willing to sacrifice their lives for each other, and but both of them were so willing to do that of course. *FEELS*

AAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHH! *SQUEAL* THEY KISSED! AT LAAAAAAAASST! *HAPPY DANCE* *ROLL INTO A POTATO* :'DDDDDDD Ahhh... finally they're an item. And LMAO at Riley's heartrate beeping erratically and rapidly when the kiss got steamier. XD

Yup. yup. They were never gonna agree on that particular matter. Both were too rock-headed. NAwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww their SECOND KISS KLAHJFAKJHG and that last line about more kisses to come LAJGAGHKA* DIES*

I MISS RILIEEEELLLL! SO MUCHHHHH! *SNIFF*

Please write more! An epilogue, or a new story, or a sweet and cute one-shot, ANYTHING! I'll take anythiiiingg! You're so talented at writing and I mean the details, all the sophisticated grammar and extensive vocabularies, and all the RILIEL FEELS! We want MOREEE! XD

You deserve more reviews!

And also, don't hesitate if you wanna chat through PM :) XD I do that a lot with other authors ;D

Muy Bueno... Lastima que se acabo

I love it
Can i ask for a sequel or at lest a few snapshots.. of them... its just you make it so perfec , that is sad that is finished

Loved this story! I'm so sad that that was the last chapter! Please continue to write intelligance fan fics your amazing at it and you have a great sense of the characters! Can't wait till you next story. Amazing Job!

OMG, I shouldn't have read this on a train... I'm trying so hard not to cry! What an emotional chapter... It was just so perfect. I think you should get a movie deal for this.
I really want to thank you for writing such an epic story :) Loved Every Single Chapter! You're the best!

IT WAS SO PERFECT. OMG, I can't believe it's over!

Jdhbhwiehhdjjein I'm so done right now

Great job! What a great read this was. Now...let's talk about the sequel. Are we going to see Riley trying to be badass throughout her recovery? How will this affect her job? Will she pretend to be okay just to get back out in the field to protect Gabriel? What if Gabriel's life is on the line again and she's not 100% and things go south?

Oh my gosh. I'm sitting here trying not to cry at that ending. It was so beautiful and I didn't think be so happy to read the ending. I really truly mean it - I took at least a half hour to finish this because I was crippled by the overwhelming feels. Thank you so so much for being an amazing writer! :) I really enjoyed our behind-the-scenes convos too! Thank you for everything!

I love it! It was beautiful!