I'm not going to lie...I too thought Rumple was going to put that tape over Neal's mouth. Whew. I'm glad he made the decision to choose family. Can't wait to see what happens next...

Oh my god! I can't believe Rumple did that! Why would he need magic if Neal is already here. I bet he's going to steal the potion so he must want magic but why? There must be a reasonable explanation...maybe he wants to find Belle too. He doesn't know she's in Storybrooke. Then again, who says she is...locking her up was what Regina did...who knows what went through crazy Ursula's head.

One would expect breaking the curse would be easier with someone who actually lived in the enchanted forest..except you chose the one person who would be no help at all. I don't mean that in a bad way..Neal/Baelfire left the enchanted forest long before any of these characters in Storybrooke were even born. Because he doesn't know anyone personally except is father (who probably won't even recognize him. Despite getting his memories after he heard Emma's name, the last time he saw Bae he was 12 or 14 and now he's in his 30's) so he has no idea how anyone would react or how to get them to believe. Keeps the suspense up cause Neal is an outsider like Emma was. I think it's even harder for him cause he knows the curse is real and he can't even relax as he has no idea how to break it

On chapter 5 now but I noticed there are only 10 chapters..I'm not ready for the story to end. *cries*

Chapter 2 done. I wish I could leave kudos or a like or vote...something. I love this story. I can tell the plot will develop nicely.

Just read the first chapter. Seems very interesting so far. Can't wait to see what you do with the characters and how the story turns out.

Its weird that no one came up with such a genius yet simple idea. Neal doesn't abandon Emma and jail. Seriously!? Your a freaking genius.

I really liked this story, but there are a few things you still haven't answered, like how did Ursula get Regina and Robinhood's son? What about Belle? Did Jefferson release her? Did he have any reason to if he wasn't involved in Ursula's apple turnover scheme?

You don't have to answer; it's your story, after all. But I think it'd make a great sequel.

;3 C-sama

More!

I HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER UNITES REGINA AND ROBIN AND ROLAND AGAIN I'M IN PAIN OVER HERE

GOSH DARN IT RUMPLE

FINALLY EMMA COMES TO HER SENSES...kind of

Neal, stubborn as always. As if Rumple would ever hurt you on purpose... sigh.

I find I hate Ursula even more than I hated Regina (who I adore now don't get me wrong but I used to want to wring her neck).

I guess I'm way curious on what you're going to do with Hook in this story? Or if he's even going to be in it at all?

Yes! Reunion soon pleaseee