Looking forward to more

Great story. The only problem I have with it is how loosely you throw around love. We haven't read anything that really points towards them having a true love for each other. On a different note, lovve the story and keep writing

Hum i wounder what that means? Black and weiss have something Devious planed for the two sisters.

This is an awesome story.

Well glad to see slowing down a little bit. Thanks for the update.

So far so good to me, keep up the good work! :D

I think what Weiss was doing seemed out of character trying to force it on Ruby like that. But lets see how this plays out.

Awesome chapter keep going

Interesting story. Weiss needs to pump the brakes, for sure.

Hmhmhmhmhmhm. Good job on grammar, I haven't found (or remembered) any mistakes. I know dialogue is really hard to write, but, I personally think this exchange is a bit forced, or at least over-dramatized. Though I suppose Weiss would just try to hide herself from something she didn't want to confront on an emotional level. Ah well. On a side note it does look like Ruby handled that very poorly, it sounded like the beginning of a 'friend zone' speech. Anyway, good job so far, you may or may not do this already but read over your story a few times and see if everything flows well. I've found this to be the easiest way to make sure the talking between characters is organic and within their characterizations. I'd comment on the plot but...that's still heavily in development. Also, I vote for picking up on the YangXBlake story from here rather than rewinding. Keep at it! I'll be waiting!

Wow Weiss, What a bitch.
Glad I ship Ladybug more than this

I realy hope ruby and weiss work things out in ur story.

Oh my God Weiss is a such a bitch and I fucking love it, God damn why is this story so good

like this so far, keep going

Ah finally an update. Weiss is too headstrong and Ruby too vague. Maybe locking them in a small room would help :D Well I wasn't really expecting angst and I hope it will be solved soon.
Btw about the pool - I honestly don't care about Bumblebee fic cause I don't really like that ship. No offense but I'd prefer if you focused on this fic, but ultimately the decision is up to you.