You, my friend, have some serious problem with abuse (Seriously, stop abusing Saku-chan T-T). But it was an awesome one-shot nonetheless, and a sequel would be great :)

i like it but i agree, it does feel incomplete

Amazing!

please write a sequel and its a nice story

I think you did an awesome job writing this, and believe it's good. Question. Is this a One-shot? Because if it is, in my opinion, this would make an excellent multi-chapter story. However, you are the author so you decide, either way makes the story well to read. I really enjoyed the story. :)
-JJ

Loved it would also like a sequel.

Very cute. I really like this. You have a good writing style and I didn't see any grammer mistakes. ( we'll I'm not to good at grammer but I didn't notice any). And I like how you set up the story. I'll have to also check out your other stories. Can't wait to see the sequal.