damnnn this story is GOOD

Naruto not killing sasuke went the intire story is about him putting the village first makes zero sense. A wanted criminal who has gone insane and will kill anyone at anytime just lets him go. Even after this is your last chance or i will kill you. Still lets him live. Sad

I don't like what you've done with Naruto; in terms of character development, when it comes to him you went backwards. But I do like the creative idea you tried with this

Update this soon man

Update please

you just want us to hate sakura then dumo him on naruto for the hell of it lol

So do you ever plan to finish this story?

Aww come on man, exactly when the juicy, really juicy part of the juice was coming you stopped updating...
~M

When are we going to see chapter 11?

Not into Sakura punching him so I'm out. Interesting story, you should pick it back up.

He seems very weak. A draw is the same as a loss.

Whyyyyy did you do this to me , draw me into this AMAZING STORY, write so fricking awesome, and then leave me HANGING...UPDATE PLEASEEEEE

two words you cannon loving fucktad fuck and you

Well this was great and sad I mean so what if Hinata confessed her love she doesn't even know what love is either it's a joke pairing the fact it became canon is a spit in the face of Kushina not that he had to listen to his mom I mean in a way he did give his mom the finger when she said marry someone like her and yet he married a WEAK, SHY, BACKBONELESS COAWRD WHO HATES FIGHTING HAS NO CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF AND IS OVERALL ONE OF THE WORST KUNOICHI'S THERE IS IN MY OPINION. she hates fighting so why become a Kunoichi in the first place.

As for the chapter it was cool finally spending time with his friends and all, the part about Kakashi was interesting the NaruShika bonding is cool they are 2 of my fav characters afterall, but I have to say the fact he wanted to spend time with Sakura and all that and even confessing to her that he loved her it was kind of pointless as he then states that he's promised to give that Bimbo Hinata a chance. It's hard to understand Naruto sometimes He acts like he loves Sakura and he does but he's sad she still loves Sasuke so why care if he's already planning on giving Hinata a chance it's like he has a split personality or something. Don't get me wrong the story is awesome it's just confusing in the same instance

Well that wasn't bad sux that Sasgay might survive can't wait for more though