Great story!

I prray for beth to get out on her own! god, she can't wait for daryl now, and that makes me sad, that's if beth is still alive TT_TT I wanna cry

I hope this does happen. Great job

Very sweet! I didn't think it was too cheesy at all! I have read a nimber of Bethyl fics where their reunion is just an over the top cheesy love fest and while they can be nice, I just feel that neither of them (especially Daryl) would be able to properly articulate their feelings for eachother (I love you's right away for example). Anyway, I think you portrayed them beautifully and you majorly kept the balence between passionate and realisic (if that makes any sense) and not at all OOC:) Hope to read more fics of yours, also are you planning on continuing this? Because it has potential!

SQUEAL! I love cheesy! Cheesy's good! I really liked Beth's thought prosess. And daryl reactions wer so brilliant... Do you think your up for writing out what you think happened to Daryl in his words? I know Beth would wonder. Vary well done.

I hope this is close to what happens on the show! :) You're a very good writer; I very much enjoyed reading this!

Awwww, that's so beautiful! :) Love it!

i love how you had her set fire to it. i hope things work out for them. thanks

I'm just so upset that Beth got taken and I needed some happiness. Thanks for that :)

LOVE it. I've been in a tizzy since the last episode. I always shipped Daryl and Carol, but don't see it now that she is so changed. I love this pairing and am so worried that we won't see Beth again until next season! They have a moment then are ripped apart!

this is perfect i really really love it

This was fantastic! Honestly? I think this would be a really great starting chapter! I hope you get some inspiration to add more to it because I want to see what happens next!

Thank you for this! This was the most in character daryl/beth fic I have found! Much more realistic than them just jumping straight into bed together. I really enjoyed it, it was just what I was looking for!

Nice!

Not too cheesy and I love our damsel fighting her way out. Call me morbid but I would have liked a bit more anguish. Why would men (presumably) just kidnap a girl for no reason? Yeah, no.
Good oneshot!