Reviews for Jack's inner battle
Demi clayton chapter 10 . 4/19/2019
I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.
blanca cronan chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
I am really oppsesed with this book it is awesome
Conan Shinichi Lover chapter 10 . 6/17/2016
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I AM DYING TO SEE THEIR REACTIONS TO HIS MEMORIES! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Silvia0806 chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Loved it plz make more like this it's awesome
Silvia0806 chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
LOOOVVVEEEDDD IT!
Silvia0806 chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
Plz write more I love your work keep going
Guest chapter 10 . 7/9/2014
This story was amazing. i loved it so much! thanks for writing it!
WinchesterNimrod chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
AWESOME!
Excellant idea for this story(:
stormseeker123 chapter 7 . 5/4/2014
This would have been a good story if you hadn't kept switching the point of views every five lines.
ZennyFan825 chapter 8 . 4/25/2014
This story is amazing. I always wanted to find out what happens if Jack goes evil and I wanted to write a story around that but I'm not that great :( but then I found this and this story is what I'm after it's really great :)
ZennyFan825 chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
Oh no Jack don't loose :(
HiddenViolet chapter 10 . 3/23/2014
This is a great story and I really enjoyed it. I don't normally review but I sympathize with it being your first. Keep writing!
EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 10 . 3/20/2014
Wow, this is really good. I love Dark Jack, this is so cute, I love all the hurt/comfort with Jack and Bunny :D I love this XD I would go read the sequel now but it's late and I have to sleep, I'll totally read it tomorrow though, it looks really good :)
b7nnyst7ffs chapter 10 . 3/18/2014
I can't wait for the next one!
b7nnyst7ffs chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
Oooh! two mini chapters! Uh! I hope the guardians win
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