I found myself rereading this again. A great story. The only thing that I can suggest is to add more details about the physical appearance of the characters the first time they're introduced, and add few reminders everytime a they're mentioned again (especially the OCs). Like shape of face, height, nose, lips, more other than hair colors or eye colors. It's really helping me as a reader. I mean, from the beginning to the end, I rely on my own imagination about the existing characters (esp movie reference), and also your OCs. I really like how you wrote the Canon characters or OCs, they have distinct personalities, I just have difficulty picturing them.
This is a great story. Thanks a lot!

Very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

This is definitely an interesting start so far. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

This is amazing! I love how you portrayed the characters and developed the plot. My one question is though, why is this ending different from the one on archive of our own? Or have you changed both of them to match?

I have to start off by saying this was a'll kinds of incredible. This is one of my all time favorite stories, you've really out done yourself! I truly loved loved loved this story and I'm so glad you wrote it!

Amazing, AMZING.

I love this story. Sometimes it was getting too twisted and convoluted for my tastes, but it passed and all is well. So I'm glad. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE your twins and the story around them. And the part Legolas had in their coming around. Good job!

Well, if it came to it, maybe Legolas could call them out on it - he may be only 60, but they needed to keep their presence silent only until the council - so if his brother isn't there by then, Legolas could announce who he really is - he knows at least what happened to Tuiw and that would be something to address the council with in any case. And I don't now if they would dare prohibit his presence based on age - it would worsen their relations with Greenwood more then they were. And Glorfindel nearly found out that Legolas is son of Thranduil, not Beren, he was just waylaid for now (maybe).

Anyway, I loved the archery lesson and the rather huge step forward the twins made. Hope to see more of them and Legolas soon!

I love how you're going with Legolas and the twins! I love the conversations and altercations (is that the right word?) they have.

I like your twins. And I would to see more conversations between them and Legolas. It would be nice if he could help them.

This was such am amazing story. Thank you for this long and beautiful ride and for sharing this story with us!

Congrats on finally finishing the story! It was fun to read. Can't remember when I first started reading but glad I found it. I would love to read a sequel if you ever make one.

Question: How long does the Old One actually resist the stone after this story?

CHEERS!

I hope you won't stay away too long ;p I'll miss your depth and emotions of your fics.

Enjoyed so much. Thank you for writing. -t.

A really nice story that left me with a shiver and a smile. :)
Great job!

I fell in love with this story and had to finish it... xD I can't believe this doesn't have much reviews, I enjoyed it... and the story and your characterization... i honestly thought at first that Echail was the bad one, but you had me there.. xDD Thanks for this story! Loved it!