Awesome story!

You were right to end it here. Some stories drag out the recovery stuff simply for sport. Good story.

Fishing spears and sharpened pieces of timber. Where do these ideas come from?

What a terrifying ordeal. So glad that Gup Gup was there to ease Danny's anxiety and Duke was there to keep Steve from going over the edge.

Well written. I could picture the scene easily and feel the increasing tension. Nicely done, as always.

Awesome story! Poor Danny and Steve! They can't even have a day of sight seeing! Lol. Thank you for sharing!

Good thing the boys are Ok. Glad they had a friendly face there for them. Especially for Danny.

Loved all the whumpy goodness you shared with us :)

Was a great ending! Truly enjoyed their bromance friendship :), as always! T

Very nice. I love Danny being grumpy.

Great story.

Great story. Loved the character portrayal. Steve waiting for his partner...so cute. Anyways, looking forward to more. I am glad you're a Danny whumper...right? Hope you are. Thanks for making my day.
-Ellie!

Oh wow I loved this! Sorry for the late review - crazy week even after being laid off. Just lots to do. I wish there was MORE MORE MORE! I really liked it a lot! Robertson was great and poor Steve being forced to wait so long to make sure Danny was alright. Looking forward to the next one!

I loved it!

I loved this story! Had no idea I was at the end! So here's the complaint - it ended too soon! But you did say you were working on another one, right? Can't wait! Love your characterization of both Steve and Danny as well as Duke and the other men in the story! Again, great work!

Loved every bit of it!