I like how the story is written and the fact that Nico is interacting with someone (even though it's a six year old), but I think a good way to go from here is to have a time skip to when she's already a teenager.
That way her interaction with Nico can get a bit more...well...a bit more teenager-like and the plot can actually progress .
If you know what I mean.
So that's all!
Great job on everything else.
Just think about what I mentioned earlier cause it might give you ideas.

Wonderfully done

I can imagine Nico as Accelerator from 'A Certain Magical Index' and "A Certain Scientific Railgun' wher accelerator is overprotective over his little companion Misaka 20001

Laurel needs to be Bianca! I love this story annyways, and it doesnt matter if she isn't, but it just fits so well!

This is a great story I can't wait until you update again.

The plot of this story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I love Zackel ( hey, why not? All ships have a name!). I like this story because:
1. It's original.
2. Not cliche. It's pretty unique if you ask me and is it just me or are they demigods? Because that would explain everything.
3. You portray Laurel's innocence very well.
I'm not complaining or anything but I'd like to suggest replying to reviews because it'll make your (figurative?...) job easier. Less repeated questions, you know. Laurel is also pretty smart at figuring out people's emotions... I think she's also the daughter of a certain immortal son of Leto and Zeus...Also, sorry for not reviewing other chapters! I would have, but there's no point in writing the same thing I'm writing here. Keep writing!

- S.S.S.

wow this is a really good fanfic please update soon !

Could ya please update?! Pleeeeease?!

:D YOU UPDATED.

I swear, every fanfic I read just stops at chapter eleven. You finally got past it. Tada.

I'm exhausted at the moment so I won't analyze too deeply. Biggest thing was that there was too much dialogue and boasting when Nico and Leo fought. Laurel and Zack are cute (I've had a soft spot for siblings since TTC, for obvious reasons). Et cetera.

Oh. And. I don't count this as a spoiler for BoO, because Riordan himself revealed it before the book came out...

It has Nico's POV.

I KID YOU NOT.

Wasn't sure if you knew :D now ya do. Anyway. Yeah. I'm so tired I've developed dyslexia. Until next update,

Nyx

Wonderful as always! I eagerly await the next chapter! :)

Fantastic chapter. And Happy late Thanksgiving!

OH MY GOODNESS YOU'RE ALIVE! I actually thought something seriously wrong had happened. Great chapter and you should try to finish this before you read BoO because it might influence your plot. Anyway poor Nico ended up in a pool! Hazel must be soooo worried and poor Leo has to fix remake that gps. I am super excited for the next chapter and I like the protectiveness Zack has! So cute :) Have a happy thanksgiving there in USA!

Okay okay. No spoilers. I'd assumed you had read it due to one line you added until I read the authors note at the end. So I wonder who he'll run into next. Maybe Frank? Annabeth? Jason? Hazel? Piper? Percy?

please update soon

This is an amazing story. Please update soon.