This is the first Hobbit fanfic I've read, and I'm happy to say it was this one!

Aaaaawww! This story was so fun to read! And, even though it was brief, I was still touched by the brotherly fluff that ensued from Kili and, especially, Fili!

That's it? Hmm okay. I wish there was more. I really grew fond of this fanfic.
Avalanches are really dangerous. I'm glad in the end of this fanfic Kili survived and was okay.
Well written and a job well done! Keep up the amazing writing!

I loved the story
It was lovely
Just one thing. Don't get mad. Someone else had probably pointed this out before.

But I think you called kili a hobbit once.

great start...poor kili hurt and buried. but he DOES have access to water...the wall of snow!

Yay! Kili is going to be OK! :)
This was an amazing story! I really enjoyed it! :)

I'm terribly sorry for your loss. I don't blame you for not writing.

I think you ended this well. The ending is always the hardest part for me.

great story ive really enjoyed it im sorry to hear about whats been going on in your personal life hope you feel ok soon. life gets on top of us at times :)

Hey first of all, no need to apologise. I'm very sorry for your loss, and I hope you'll be okay. *sends hug*
I liked the ending of the story, especially Balin. I could totally picture him telling Thorin off. ;) I'm glad kili is getting better, and will be fine soon.

Sorry but i really didnt like the ending..i really loved your fic but then you ended it as if you were in a hurry..im sorry i dont mean to be blunt..but it's what i think..but i understand why and i really believe you couldve made the ending better or continued the story i guess but since youve been through a lot of ordeals..i understand..disappointing though but thank you for the fic! And i hope everything will be okay with you soon.

this is really good

Great chapter, although a few typos (like two so don't panic) in the beginning, and Kili's a dwarf not a hobbit. ;) In any case, loved how Oin and Balin handled Thorin and glad that Kili woke. And I love the continued development of Bofur's back story. :) Update soon.

Aww! An ending? Already? This was a good fic! Well, in any case, well done, I enjoyed it. I hope to see more of your writings some time soon!
Luaith xxx

Thanks for the chapter. ...But it's cut rather abruptly. Will you write some epilog? Even short one? Please :)

I wish you'd finish this :(