You left me a sobbing mess q.q ! It's so good but I'm crying for Shiori. What kind of parent are her father and mother ?! You write so good and you pull me so much into this story it's almost scary. I can't wait for the next update and hope it comes soon.

Lots of Love
Sayori1412

I'm crying so bad here, Shiori...It's not your fault you were born as a girl everything is not your fault...The parents it's too much you know...if they can't appreciate you for being born as a girl...then they just don't deserve someone like you...pinning the blame of a nine year old child?Why are they blaming you...you didn't do anything wrong...It's their fault so don't blame yourself...if Tsubasa is fighting for his life...it is not your fault ...you didn't make Tsubasa have a weak body...you didn't tell yourself to be a girl...so don't blame yourself...

Honestly, I've read lots of stories with character like shiori. Unwanted child. Unwanted life. But you bring more depths to it. The story is good, the plot is good. But i don't think it will be this good if written by someone else's hands. You, author is the one who makes your stories goos. Please continue your writings. I'll gladly follow them.

Stupid parents that act like that... It not a child fault... They never think that what they do to her was that make they suffer... There is no reward to you will get if you not do the same... Make Shori break her relationship with the family... Make her free from the cage that her family and her self build

She's finally breaking down! This almost brought me to tears. I don't know if I could have endured what Shiori has and still be functioning normally. Respect!
So well written as always!
Hope you cab get some rest if you're tired. Don't stress over the story, I will no matter how long it takes!

wow. this is really good!

That was so cruel of her parents to blame her of what happened to her siblings even though they should know that it was not even her fault... I mean if I would be on the position of Shiori I don't think that I can hold and keep myself together that much longer as her...(sigh) ... Good chapter btw.

So Shiori's parents are entirely awful and deserve awful things to happen to them just not at the expense of Tsubasa, he's adorable. Shiori really needs love and care from true family and friends.

You updated! Thank you oh so much even if you're tired! This is just so well written, so beautiful. I hope Shiori's brother will be all right. If not... TT. Of any case, update when you feel like it (Just please please don't delete the story). I'll certainly check out your other stories (the Mandarin ones, I think?) later on.

Oh for goodness' sake, you seem to make my heart break at the mere word of Shiori breaking. You're basically making my heart bleed for the poor girl. Author-san, you're a really good writer, especially when you're capable of making me cry at the very glance of the name 'Shiori'. Please continue to write such good chapters and rest easy so that you won't be overwhelmed just to update.

I love your way with words and I guess your style of writing. Oh! And those quotes at the beggining and the end of each chapter. Well anyways, it's awesome so please update!

update pleaseeeee

Shioriiiiiii ;_;

Wow, so much tension here. I really do feel liked she's braking apart. Hopefully they will be able to help her! Can't wait to learn more about Shiori's past, update soon!

my heart can't take it. I need to know. please update son