I like Amy she seems like the decisive type

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for those that are reading this commentary before reading the fix more stop now the author of this story clearly never read or watched dbz he didn't even try to read a wiki about the saiyan race caracteristics

you know that saiyan are natural born warriors and dont need to train the body to have muscles right? are you really a dbz fan?

themore i reaxthw chapter the more flaw in saiyan body and natural abilitoes i see. all saiyans have snormous ki and a extremsly toned body withou even training
you should ate least go to drangonball fandom site, its disgusting how you make him normal humam strength only go beyond if he use ki

so why forcing a nobody like jack to be a hero?

ots is really impossiblw to read even forcing myself to it. you problally never read the manga or watched the anime because you dont even understand how saiyan (as a race) work, if he is only half saiyan i understand his extremely weak power level, but you should know that pure saiyasn are a warrior race they become strong by sibly becoming old and they have the instincts to fight and use ki

why is you mc so weak ? sayan are a warrior race so they dont need to train to become stronged but yoj mc apear to be extremley weak

many flaws in this story and i alreaduly can see the cliche coming.
first he zhoud be much stronger and faster than spiderman in the anime goku kid (the begining of the serie) already can beat up a dinosaur and you make hkm being manhandled by peter so easy

why dont you say in the prologue that 3 saiyans are in the same universe? i wasted my time reading this shit

Its on.

Yare yare...

LMAO.