Reviews for Chocolate |
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Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 6/15/2014 So sweet! (In more ways than one! XD) I thought you did a fantastic job of writing this. I don't know why I didn't review before, because this is my second time reading this. I really like how in character both Ed and Roy are. I particularly liked your description of their first anniversary. That whole paragraph was moving. Good job! |
FiendedVendetta chapter 1 . 3/23/2014 This is such a good fic! In-character, entertaining, and just the right amount of spicy. Very nice! |
sidesee chapter 1 . 3/20/2014 Finally a happy story.I really like your cute! |