Reviews for A Twisted World |
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Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2018 Interesting. I look forward to more. I liked seeing Freya and Hunith. |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/30/2018 This is going to be good. I look forward to more. |
mersan123 chapter 10 . 4/29/2018 Wonderful. Loved the chapter. Arthur is learning a great deal too. |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/16/2018 Oh I look forward to this. I really do. |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/15/2018 I like how you wrote Arthur revising his views on magic. |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/6/2018 You wrote Arthur well. His trepidations and his revelations are believable. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/6/2018 Your writing is very vivid. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/6/2018 Balinor is definitely in character, gruff and hard on the surface. Poor Arthur and Leon must be literally starving. I hope Merlin feeds them soon. |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2018 Love the description of the place. I can really feel Arthur's homesickness. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2018 Good save. Arthur is being very rude. He is a lot more courteous in canon. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 It's fast paced. The shorter chapters break the flow of the story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 Whoa. Omgosh This is good. |
bubzchoc chapter 8 . 4/5/2018 Great chapter |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/5/2018 First meeting with the great dragon seems to have gone well all things considered. |
mersan123 chapter 7 . 3/30/2018 Excellent chapter. The story is really starting to bring in all the familiar faces now. Hope to see more soon. |