Reviews for A Twisted World
Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2018
Interesting. I look forward to more. I liked seeing Freya and Hunith.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/30/2018
This is going to be good. I look forward to more.
mersan123 chapter 10 . 4/29/2018
Wonderful. Loved the chapter. Arthur is learning a great deal too.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/16/2018
Oh I look forward to this. I really do.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/15/2018
I like how you wrote Arthur revising his views on magic.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/6/2018
You wrote Arthur well. His trepidations and his revelations are believable.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/6/2018
Your writing is very vivid.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/6/2018
Balinor is definitely in character, gruff and hard on the surface.
Poor Arthur and Leon must be literally starving. I hope Merlin feeds them soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2018
Love the description of the place.
I can really feel Arthur's homesickness.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2018
Good save. Arthur is being very rude. He is a lot more courteous in canon.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2018
It's fast paced. The shorter chapters break the flow of the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Whoa. Omgosh
This is good.
bubzchoc chapter 8 . 4/5/2018
Great chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 4/5/2018
First meeting with the great dragon seems to have gone well all things considered.
mersan123 chapter 7 . 3/30/2018
Excellent chapter. The story is really starting to bring in all the familiar faces now.
Hope to see more soon.
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