I am actually from Aberdeenshire, Scotland where Doric is spoken by the majority of people (especially in the rural parts) and I must say, it isn’t like that. It uses the same grammar as English but just different words and not EVERY word can be translated, nor can every phrase. The most Doric person that I have heard (which is SUPER Doric (someone not from Aberdeenshire probably couldn’t understand it)) doesn’t have every word in Doric. The exaggeration was the bad part about the ‘Doric’. I’m sorry, but you portrayed Doric in the wrong way. Listen to some readings of Robbie Burns, that should help. I don’t want to be mean, just so you understand that.

Great story overall, I really appreciated the bits with Luxsoka and how you explained everything that happened to Ahsoka. Also, you did a great job liking CW and Rebels. As for the epilogue, I really like how it turned out and how all the characters are brought together in the end. Awesome job!

That chapter was so awesome. I really appreciate the fact that you rewrote "Spanish Ladies" to fit the universe xD and the part about the lekku and the sound Lux made was really great and an interesting idea. An Ahsoka's appearence, just marvellous.

"Coming in fangs out like a Togruta." I just laughed so hard at this xD

Great story so far, I really like to see that you know so much about the universe and although it was a little confusing with all the slang words, the fact that you defined them clearly prevented confusion. And I love how you introduced Lux in this story and all the references to the ring and what or who awaits Lux.

Dang, I was wondering if I had read this story before... And I realized I had when looking back at the reviews! I'm glad I found this story again simce it's been updated simce I'd last read it, and seemingly completed?

This was just great. I'm always have a sweet spot for Luxsoka and this was beyond what I expected. It was so fluffy and just cute, making me always "awwwwwww" or squeal because it got too cute. Great job

This is a pretty good epilogue, and with what has been happening in the show, there's no surprise that some changes would probably be made, and I totally got the reference you put at the end. It's just as good as the original prologue, and I can't wait for the next story to begin. Keep up the good work.

Yes, Luminara was sad and you handled the change well in this chapter.

Keep writing stories like this.

Wedge "Right with you boss."

Will we see Ahsoka?

i love the meeting of ahsoka!

whats in the box?

i would suggest pg if that were in the ratings

the order from Bail Organa was a nice touch