omg, this is haunting! Seriously, I did not expect this to be so mesmerizing! And the writing is beautifully descriptive and easy for me to imagine the story.

...LOVED it!

loved it, totally scared me, i read it on a rainy, gloomy day, which added more chill to it, then for the rest of the day i was in a sort of daze, please do more like this!

Chilling and riveting. You, writer, have a gift. I absolutely loved this.

Holy... you should have labeled this a Horror/Tragedy.

Wow, I love it! You've got a wonderful "dark fairytale" way of writing - this story feels just like something parents would tell their children on a cold dark winter's night in the middle ages!

You also describe the horror of the situation so perfectly, giving just enough information but avoiding too much description. Well done!

Great stuff.

Good story. Well written. And Hans so insane!

Remind me not to piss you off.

This is brilliant.

beautifully dark. keep writing, ok.

This is so disturbingly beautiful... Well done!