Good afternoon, you write very well, you have good writing and the descriptive form is excellent. I hope you can continue the story

I think you really capture how hard it is to move on and movie in with someone else. It will be difficult for awhile, but in the end it will be worth it. I really enjoy your stories; hopefully you'll finish this one.

Getting back to your stories. :P
The writing style here is so posh! But then, it is Alfred. I love your writing style. It's so flawless.

I really like this story! I wish it was longer but it is good. I like the interaction between Bruce and Dick and i thought the rings were precious. Good job!

I love this and I can't wait for the next update!

LOVED IT!
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!
KEEP ON WRITING!

Very nice indeed. I'm a fan of young dick grayson stories and this is excellent.

How have I not discovered this until now? I've been reading your work for two years now, and you never cease to simultaneously break my heart and heal it. This is absolutely fantastic and I thank you for all your hard work, I know it's not easy.

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Green jello is the greatest!

more please this is fantastic!

I applaud and praise you maker of wonders. Not only can you write a good story but you can write for Alfred. Few can write for Alfred with such excellency and even few can do such in first person. *claps repetitivly*

'Prey tell' should be 'pray tell'. I loved Alfred's POV! What happened to Dick in Juvie?

The story is great, but you need to make more chapters and you must also make stories that explains Bruce's other kids orgins .

I really like these few chapters! Is there any hope you'll ever update again? If or if not, until then I will just read DnB again.