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  Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2019 Great story! Well written... Although the foreplay was fear too long and the actual sex too quick. Aside from that it as a very well written story! Well Done. |
 Silvara chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 It was quite nice. I could enjoy reading something more gradually intimate and much much longer. There is a wounderful lore justbegging to be developped at the meeting point of these two worlds...something a little Shakespear-like, but also somewhatTolkien-like... Has something on such note already been tried here? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2016 OH GOD |
| Mishyyy chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 Wow that was HOT! ... Or cold lol well done |
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 5/16/2015 awesome~! |
| Reishin Amara chapter 1 . 3/31/2015 I officially need boxers...as these just ripped from too much Thanks ALOT... |
| Random Person chapter 1 . 1/13/2015 Okay. That was by far the best jelsa smut I've ever read holy shit like, it was so detailed I could just see it! One thing I noticed was that if Elsa couldn't see him, then she didn't believe in him and wouldn't be able to feel him cause she'd just go straight through him. But you know, besides that it was flawless bravo |
| Palomita chapter 1 . 1/4/2015 Yummy |
| Rei Uta chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 Alright... While I enjoyed the rather interesting use of ice in this, the logical sequence is somewhat off, and there was no explanation as to how she was suddenly able to see Jack after they did stuff. Also, I felt Elsa's initial reaction to an invisible force touching her was honestly rather out of character. Any girl would have screamed or gotten freaked out, unless they were expecting it. For all she knows, it might've been an ugly troll touching her, not our handsome and suave Jack Frost. I would most definitely recommend more explanation regarding how she's suddenly able to see him, and if you have interest in keeping them in character (which I sincerely hope so, but doubt since you've got Jack molesting our dear Elsa) I'd recommend a more realistic reaction to suddenly being touched by the 'wind' like that. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2014 So detailed and full of passion great job |
| Bassy66 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014 Damn that was something. |
| Bassy66 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014 ok. wow. So is this when Anna comes in? |
| strongyu chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 .EVER EVER - IN - MY - ENTIRE - LIFE It just perfect, so perfect that I don't know how to say. It's so hat and beautiful at the same time. How could you do it. ; w ; Really love it I can say. |
| ElsaTheSnowQueen2 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014 amazing i love it! wonderful! 3 3 3 |
| peanutbutterandgarlicgirl chapter 1 . 7/23/2014 There's got to be something that happened after this! You should really do a 2nd chapter to this one. That was amazing! |
