Reviews for The Chosen Ones
BaddieDZ2 chapter 2 . 7/26
Lmao good fucking riddance to you. What absolute garbage.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/6
Type your review sharingan
Blaze501st chapter 16 . 4/24/2017
wow...u made tsunade and Jiraya evil...yeah...i do not like that, at all
Blaze501st chapter 12 . 4/24/2017
i gotta say, that i really enjoy this story so far...I am guessing that Hiruzen fell to the dark side and has conquered the planet...wow...that sucks...will naruto receive more training in the ways of chakra now that itachi and the rest are here?
Me chapter 4 . 10/16/2016
I know you have abandoned this story long before this but I felt I just had to state something. You have become unoriginal. By creating the crock that Kakashi must stay with the Skywalkers in order to put Naruto and himself in line with canon is totally unoriginal and shows just how unimaginative you are. And what is up with the age jump? And Naruto and Anakin being older than he is in canon? You are all over the place. Get it together.
agnar chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
Uh, Sarutobi was only 68-69 when the manga/anime began, which is when Naruto was 12! When Kyuubi attacked, Sarutobi would've been like, 56 or so, not EIGHTY!

He became Hokage really young, and 50's is old for Ninja, since it's such a physical job. So yeah, making him 80 the night Kyuubi attacked is just silly. That'd make frigging 92 or so when Naruto graduated!
Ravens Roost chapter 6 . 5/19/2016
NOOOOOOOO WHHYYYYYYY!?
ShadouRyu-kun chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
really, I don't know what to say up to this chapter. it's not your typical starwarsxnaruto fic, that much I'm certain. so many hurt, so many loss, so many death, wrap things up around here, but it's very exciting. I really looking forward to read till your last chap, and wait patiently for the continuation till the end XD
Silvereye-BW chapter 20 . 7/22/2015
Awesome story. So Naruto always calls out Padme's name during sex? That's kind of did I up.

Please update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
ive never read such a load of shit in my life... you plot is that of a 5 year old, no imagination and as simple minded as a child talking to another child... fuck off
Partsu chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
Err...what happened? last chapter Anakin was able to speak and walk while Naruto was newborn baby and here Naruto is fourteen and Anakin ten, HOW THE HELL DID THEIR AGES FLIP? This reeks of POOR PLANNING and PLOTHOLE.
get this sorted and this would become awesome story!
InflatedChimp chapter 6 . 12/13/2014
Well that ending was somewhat surprising.
I'm left a little confused though, since when are Kakashi and Naruto slaves? This isn't mentioned before hand and how did it happen?
InflatedChimp chapter 5 . 12/13/2014
I don't really mind the whole Sith getting rid of the Rule of Two as Sidious never really followed it anyway. What bugs me more is that Anakin in this is 16/17 and Qui Gon thinks he should be trained. In canon Anakin was considered too old at 10 and Qui Gon had some doubts about the Jedi accepting him at that age.
Wrath of The Sun Deity chapter 20 . 12/6/2014
Please update
david.teague.3950 chapter 6 . 11/24/2014
not only are you a crazy bastard for killing off Kakashi like you did but where the hell do you get off applying the coin thing with Naruto when he was never a slave air-head?
113 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »