The story is horrendous. Not only is there tons of plot holes, Harry along with the other characters seem to always make stupid decisions. Harry, despite being “800” years old, acts like a somewhat demented child and for someone that’s supposedly so old, he solves most of his problems by dying instead of using skills he should’ve acquired from his 800 or so years of being alive. Just by looking at the story, anyone with a braincell can tell the author is probably some 10 year old kid. If you’re looking for a good read, look elsewhere cause this story will probably make you lose more braincells than “My Immortal” did to most of the people on during the 2007s.

Please please please please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it.

Asu.. Go to hell

Wow I can't read this for a 800 year old he acts like a child he keeps dodging answering her just say hey im H Potter and be done with it so childish

Everyone is childish, behaviour is unreal. This fic is shitty at best.

This is awesome

Great story! I find it hilarious that Harry is afraid of females in his family - whether human or snake, haha.

Really? just flat out cracks at the first question? is he gonna bend and spears next xD

Please update soon loving tbe story

wait... is she a witch?!

I already complained about this story, but come on. Fury is a dumb cunt in this chapter. "Join or die, guy who doesn't stay dead." Really? He sounds like a complete moron.

The whole interrogation is rather ridiculous to begin with because there's no reason for Harry to actually put up with it and he's not actually unable to leave if he wants to. Not even Natasha really seems reason enough for him to hang around since if he cared that much about his family, he would have kept a better eye on them over the years.

Harry keeps acting weak and stupid and it really doesn't make any sense for the kind of character you alleged him to be.

This story is kind of awful. Why would Harry go along with SHIELD? He's a wizard. An ancient and powerful one at that. He's well over 800 years old. He learned to apparate when he was about 16.

There's literally nothing they could have done to stop him.

Also, the writing in general is very loose and vague. It relies on the reader knowing everything about both Harry Potter and The Avengers to fill in the gaps. That's not a good thing.

You also really need to stop it with the flashbacks. Not only is a flashback immediately at the start of the chapter kind of gross, you also don't really mention that they're a flashback so the reader has to figure it out from context.

Lastly, Harry is too much of an idiot and dies far too easily. I mean, he gets shot to death despite being aware he was in a dangerous situation because... why? Surely he could have done something instead of just sit there looking stupid. Then you have him rant about coming back to life in front of a crowd, which sounds like precisely the opposite of what someone who is nearing a thousand years old would do. Especially when he has direct orders from Death and Fate themselves to keep that stuff a secret.

I get that you're trying to force the plot forward, but that's just the problem. You're forcing it. It doesn't flow very well at all, and it makes for a poor story.

this shit took you 4 years to write? damn this is stupid

being master of death means making sure noboby dies before their time, sounds more like bitch of fate to me.
why is a bomb from joker not ok but all the other terrorist attacks are?
no if any job it would be more like making sure nobody cheats death like the flames or logan

he killed himself at 80 because he was tired of using a glamour for so long. then you tell he found out he is a metamporh... kinda big hole in your plot there