I hate the endings. This isn't much of a hikaruxkaoru.

Well, this whole fic is an emotional wreck waiting to happen. It play with your emotions and makes you question things that should be obvious. Great job!

Thank you bunches! I'm looking forward to the other ending as well!

Okay I've really enjoyed the story even though you're evil and I spent half the time crying! Please update soon!

You asked for my input in a comment on my story, so here it be!
Well, I must say that was quite entertaining. You have the potential to be a very strong writer...so I will be following you :) The story itself was very precise and to the point. There were a few things I saw that could use a bit of adjusting, but nothing major. It took me a while to fully grasp Structure, and I still find myself going back on chapters and fixing things.
And a quick suggestion... in the parts where you have a ringing phone and things like that? You have them as: "Ring, ring, ring"...try just putting them in Italic without the quotations. Putting quotations looks like it's part of the dialogue and it may confuse some people :)
Hope that helped! I tried my best to word everything so as not to offend! 3

honestly, I don't understand how can you be so exigent about reviews and things, the quality of this story is really bad, cuz you know, you wanted to writte a lot of angst things but this ended up being a complete mess, I mean, seriously this is not good enough as to be called TamaKao or HikaKao, this is just bullshit A''

Loving this story so far! I have no idea who I want him to end up with... Hope you update soon! :)

I think that you should keep him and Tamaki together, Tamaki actually appreciates Kaoru but Hikaru just keeps hurting him. btw, ur fic is really good!

I think in this story hikaru hurt kaoru to much for them to be together romantically.
but you can do whatever you want that is just my opinion.

if hikaru loves him why did he lie at the hospital

that's so sad hikaru doesn't even know what he is doing to his brother.

If you ask me you should keep the twin love. say haruhi forced hikaru or something, but please dont let the twincest win this. I say this cause i love the twins and i dont care for haruhi at all. HIKAXKAO3

I loved the chapter! You write soooooooo good!

I had a lot of fun reading this. is this the end or can i look forward to more chapters?

I like how you added another tragety out of no where but still made it fit preety well. (why must the innocent suffering make the story so wonderful T.T) forgive me kaoru for enjoying this story so much!