please update asap this is an awesome fic

I think you should have had a chapter of just family, loving spirits, no strife before introducing your next maelstrom, would have made it flow better.

While Nitika is a beautiful name, I really wish you had done some legitimate research and known that it does *not* mean what you think it does and it may be Indian, like India Indian where the name is pretty popular. Like, this story has its moments where I'm happy to be reading it, and then there are times where it's overly immature, can tell that it has a religious perversion with the dynamic & so-called familial structure and entitlements AND how often sex and love are often confused as synonymous when they are absolutely not, but this name issue... highlights some underlying racist attitudes.

I really don't know what I expected, or what I should have been expecting. I don't want to stop reading because I tortured myself this far and there are 17 more chapters left to go. But, damn, what else is there to be thrown here?

Have to hand it to you, though. You not only gave a dream poly pair, but this is the first mpreg I read where the baby actually came via an anal birth. So, thanks for that, I guess?

Seriously, someone needs to tell Severus off. His son is 19. His son is mated. Like, he needs to back the fuck off, grow the hell up, stop interfering, and let Harry have his relationship with his mates. I'm getting sick of it. He's more insufferable than canon Snape. I wanted to say that last chapter, but got caught up on the other hill.

I don't know. I really don't think Severus would have been threatening to crucio Draco until he pissed himself, especially in front of Harry. Who had been tortured extensively. That included the cruciatus curse. For a fic that has a whole lotta shit thrown into it, that's the unrealistic hill I'm planting myself on.

"I promise he will come to know harm by me." Has got to be the best typo ever.

But, omg, I understand the angsty immature exchanges better now.

(Literally, if you are offended by what I'm saying, please keep in mind this is Chapter 33 and I will still being hitting the next button, hating myself more than you can hate some rando.)

Not gonna lie... kinda starting to dislike the campy. But, as Edward once said, something something masochist.

I know that the bottom questions are like out the window now... but I am rooting for James being brought back and that could have been what Sirius found out or something. I don't know. I'm caught up in just *knowing* Severus was going to be Harry's father and I still got really excited and my chest is still like stuck in swell mode.

Tbh, I didn't want to read this story. I didn't have high hopes for it, but it had been searched for by many who forgot what this fic title was, and then was recommended by many too. And... I have never been so happy to be wrong about a story. Seriously, how it had been surmised by people searching this out... it didn't sound all too good... But if I ever forgot the title of this story, I now realize I would be explaining it the exact same way.

OH! And I realize I need to start making a list of authors and their respective stories that leave me sounding like a fucking tweeny bopper. (I'm about a year away from being 30, sooooo, great job)

So, I see that you're in a rewrite... lemme just say that one of my favorite typos comes from this chapter...

Death Easters.

deadly little eggs, aren't they? No one likes em peeps. They murder rabbits and that's why Harry is injured.
They hide on those eggs are rotten.

I really have no more jokes to crack.

"No, Mr. Cullen, Bella is your dinner." :dead: (rofl)

Okay. So. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I got caught up with needing the Next button. But. That last line has me screaming, "Three mates! Only you, Harry. I swear you are going to be the death of me."

I'm big on Drarry, Jakeward, Edward x Harry, and Jake x Draco pairings. This. This has got to be the best pairing ever, and it's got to be the best poly pairing ever. (I say this carefully since I love Yusuke x Hiei x Kurama as well.)

I really hope that it stays that way... Anywho, onward to the next chapter...

Dame I cried so much reading so emotional but I cant stop reading. Good story

Damn, you really know to made us cried so hurt

Thank you for taking the time to write. Looking forward to the next update!

send slash scenes please great book