Nice story! I really liked it!

This story is beautiful, thank you for sharing it!

Lovely story! I really liked it. :)

That was sooooooo good. It made a little bit

losing the features mentioned above, and you you did it perfectly, you have a gift for this work, the way you describe the scene of the thoughts, behaviors, interactions, left me speechless, you're awesome. On the other hand, almost died in the scene where Hisana is fifty shades of Grey in the hands of Byakuya, I loved that Byakuya did not bother him that she was a prostitute, the best was the end, the man proved to be expert and passionate making "it" , a lucky Hisana, (my favorite couple) in one single shot made me love your fic.

For my mother, you are excellent describing the personalities, especially the character of my beloved Byakuya (my favorite character, I love it), it is very difficult (in my opinion) to describe his character, because you have to keep his character seriously, his Cutting and cold words, no emotions on his face, yet you have to show that he is in love with Hisana without

OMG! That was amazing. Just thank you, so much. Thank you for bringing this into the world.

Great story, very descriptive! Good english

This is freaking Beautiful

This was quite interesting, definitely worth the read. Cheers

Wow... this is the only thing I can say at this moment of finish it reading! Wow...! In just (big) one-shot you wrote everything that I liked of those two... the actions that are characterized them! I really love how you portrait Hisana and (especially Byakuya...perhaps you are him! O.o) at the begging to the end! it's just...no OOC! While I was reading I really can imagine Byakuya! so aloof and cool and his actions to Hisana that were developed very sweet, he doesn't care about Hisana was a prostitute, and he defended her and searched a job for her 3. But at the moment they went to her room... I think Byakuya had some ideas in Fifty shades of Grey xDDD he was...spicy xDDD

I really want a epilogue! :( but I really liked it so much this story! please do more! :D

This is adorable. I'm loving your characterization of the two of them. :D

Hisana will urgently need a wheelchair from now, who knows when she will walk again? , After which my perfect Byakuya did to her, that kind is Byakuya, he sought a suitable career for Hisana, he does not care that she was a prostitute, you have great ideas, love and am obsessed with ByakuHisa by Please update your stories, I'll be stalking your profile to see if I upgrade.

Couple ByaSana is sexy and hot , i like couple Byasana.

I loved your story! They are soooo cute together, I wish she hadn't died in the anime! Great job!