I didn't even get to half through this chapter I just can't imagine Naruto calling Sasuke niisan and Sakura onaachan it's completely out of character.

new chapter or abandonned ?

Please continue!

I liked your story and am sad that it came to an end already :(

HINATA CHAN NOOOO YOU BLONG WITH NARUTO

IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 2 ?!'b

How long bro?

Liked I hope you will continue soon I really want to see Hinata and Naruto meeting again soon.

Please Update, also the story wasn't that bad I will admit you stayed on canon quite a bit but nothing else it was original like how you did the child I know there are other fics that did it but Kurama usually dies in them.

I also advise getting dropbox it is a life saver for keeping back ups of files.

I don't know about your other fic but I am hoping you will go back to at some point since I am going to read it next.

Good story I'm not really a judgmental guy since I respect the efforts the authors put in to there stories but I think your story was pretty good and that you are being a bit to hard on yourself for it and if you really think you can improve it I can't wait to see the new version.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Liked it I can't wait for the fight it will defiantly be amazing, though I hope you will pull from canon a bit after this arc.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Loved it I like how Hinata acted and how even though she is upset she still loves Naruto.

I like how you had Manami call her Kaasan was so cute.

I hope there will be some more scenes like that and Hinata getting to know Manami.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I like the OC and how you made him I actual found the way you did some how believable and like the Idea of Naruto having a body guard and knowing about his clan.

I really hope Hinata comes in soon though.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Loved I like how it happen and can't wait to how everyone else reacts.

I like how you did everyone reaction but I wonder how the Hinata will react to Naruto having a child.

Love Manami-Chan does her name mean anything if so please says so.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

That was good I like how you actually explained a bit why Team seven was closer.

I like the family setting though it is a bit of a shock to see them acting like that, I just have trouble seeing them like that point in canon.

Good chapter can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

What are you talking about the plot for a nine tailed uzamaki was really good story.

It's was kinda emotional but in my honest opinion nailed naruto's character, and frankly ain't discussed in cannon it's a shame but good chapter