Lol, I love this story, Please do more.

Literally the greatest thing ever

Please continue if you can. I love this.

I to would feel bad that everything wants and can easily kill me :(.
But still a great story that I'm still looking forward to since Oct 21,2014. :P

I wonder what would happen if the captains found them.

Add more crazy! Put in native pikmin. it would be cool. Keep up the good work

[happy voice] sweet story! really cool. :)
[ironically flat, irritated voice] now where'd ya go?!
[normal voice] haha JK. anyway i can really relate in that i'm a Pikmin supernerd (especially 3) and if anyone has any question i jump right in with an informational answer, lol
anyway, i do really like this story as you can see by my adding it to my fav's. i just checked and saw you haven't updated in a very long time. i'd love to see more. why are all the really good stories unfinished and haven't been updated in months?! (don't worry i'm not freaking out on you or anything) anyway bye :)

He he... I love this. Having your friends as the characters is cool! Though I can't remember any colors... I'll learn!

Another good chapter!

I didn't know you we're "aracnorbphobic"! XD

Well I'm still a bit confused about who is what color, the only one that I remember is that you are blue and that the other girl is pink (I'm so sorry, but I just can't remember how to spell your name).

I can't wait to see how you guys handle the water wraith! Or the Bullbear if you put it in!

Are you going to have them run into the Puffy Todestool or even the Bulbmin?

That is all I have to say for now so bye! :)

it feels like its been forever! of course, id readily take a good story to one that was posted quickly. keep going!

a Snageret the moment they start exploring...if I was in that situation, I'd problably be less likely to venture on my own again.

oh, I don't think Snagerets can eat rock pikmin, due to the rocks inability to be pirced.

I think you should have them meet pikmin at some point, or maybe some friendly enemies. 7 pikmin alone, even wit human mental capacity, won't survive long without help.

anyways, keep going! can't wait for more!

This is a great start to one of my favorite games. I just have s a question. Will you follow the games logic or will you add in your own ideas to the story? I know that people turning into pikmin isn't part of the game, but will you add things like new pikmin or new enemies? I am just curious as to what you are going to do. Anyways keep up the great stories!

A Snagret on the first day, I can only imagine what will happen to them tomorrow. A Bullbear, an Emperor Bullblax, the Water Wrath?!

For guessing who you are can you have them fight the Water Wrath?

You know, my 3DS was the first and only device I used to read Fan Fiction until I got my phone and Its the old small kind too! :)

Did you see the SSB direct yesterday? It was awesome!

I'll see you later!

I like it, I think this could be REALLY good, keep going! I'm going to go with you're Chelsea, based on the Zelda reference

I like it. It's a really cool idea. Will you guys be normal pikmin size, or be your normal size? I have a feeling this is going to be really cool, so but take as long as you need to update. I'll wait as long as you want. :)