Reviews for The Stag Of Dragonstone
LordSklatuga chapter 3 . 1/9
Good premise, atrocious writing style
9180250 chapter 2 . 3/17/2019
I’m confused why would Stannis send his only son to the Tyrells? Wouldn’t he hold some form of grudge against them from the seige? This seems unrealistic unless you gave a reason otherwise from what I’m reading it’s pretty ok.
Zurver chapter 32 . 3/14/2019
Please update soon and please make the chapters longer
darkwolf76 chapter 2 . 8/29/2018
Very interesting start! I saw your story on OC appreciation and thought I'd give it a try. Very intrigued!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/31/2018
I hate to say it but the story is rather boring. I’m not sure if it’s just me but the dialogue is boring and stale. Also I can’t seem to find anything special about Jacob. He has no impact on the story that I can see, all he does is go on and on how his father is the rightful king and that all his enemies will die. I hope you continue writing but I just can’t read anymore.
ProTaggingProperly chapter 7 . 7/20/2018
Huh. "The Queen's eyes saddened,..."
Cersie? Really. That is too implausible. Sayonara.
ProTaggingProperly chapter 6 . 7/20/2018
Wow. That is some ego-stroking you got going.
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 32 . 2/3/2018
Same with the original. You just add something, and erase other thing.
sucuri chapter 2 . 12/6/2017
shit I reviewed the wrong fic sorry!
ANyways... I love this story too. lol this is embarrassing.
I like how you put him with the tyrells! I havent seen anyone else do that with stannis "son". But also I love the tyrells so anything with them in it pleases me!
sucuri chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
I love this! So glad I found it.
Usually when there's a "trueborn princess" they always pair her with Robb, nothing against him but I love Jon more!
Still hope they end up together in the end, as much as I would hate robb to die... I wonder if she will be a hostage, if they will end the betrothal when ned dies and robb is still betrothed to a frey.. so many possibilities I cant wait to see what you will do!
And I love her with Jon! He deserves itt! my sweet boy :((
searvok chapter 23 . 12/24/2016
how about saying its slash at the start of the story? ffs
Guest chapter 3 . 10/14/2016
This story has a very promising plot but the grammatical errors and incorrect sentencing structure was really detracting. I'd really like to finish this story but I'd suggest you proof read and make some edits.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
Can u make a sequel please
RHatch89 chapter 32 . 8/8/2016
Awesome :)
RHatch89 chapter 30 . 8/5/2016
Awesome :)
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