Reviews for Swimming to Stay in One Place
EB chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
I was screaming by the end... im so hopeless xD
Blackromanoff chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
This is the 10th time I read this! This is great! Keep up!
shadow375 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Very cute! Love your writing style! I know you said you tend to lean more towards conversations, but you do such a fantastic job with them! Thank you for the laughs and great job on keeping the characters in character! :)
Prawn Crackers chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
I thought I better read this before Ragtag airs...

I really like your take on Ward and Skye. And I sometimes take refuge in the pre-Hydra stories when things were much simpler... *sighs*
Lily1986 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Awe! This was perfect! I can totally picture this happening on the show. Okay... After the last fic made me cry, this was at least fluffy enough to make me feel better. :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Really lovely!
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Really like it.
Belle97 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Aaww I love this so much! It's sweet, cute, funny and a bit sad :) Looooveeeee
nathy.faithy chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
This was great, I love it!
Jess S1 chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
That was adorable. Well written, and you managed to keep them in character. The only things I didn't like were:
1) I think it would've been better to have the actual 'dialogue' of what Skye was babbling about till it was cut off by her yelp. More effective for the scene then the description was. But I'm bit on the 'show don't tell' style of writing.
2) You didn't really give a reference on timeline for this. I'd assume it had to have taken place pretty early in the season, but it really could be at any point. As a one-shot it's not really necessary, but some idea of timeline would be nice. Before or after the Berserker staff? Before, during, or after Ward's friends-with-benefits relationship with May? Before of after Skye got shot?
3) There were so many moments near the end here where you could've paired them up, but didn't. *pouts* Meanie.
Well all's said and done, though, this was wonderful. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Fish-in-Bowl chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
I like this story it's cute and fluffy. I think you should do another story continuing off this one because I want to see how the team reacts to a soaking and clothe less Skye.
A Velvet Rose chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Nice one shot :) I feel I should commend you on your characterization of Skye. I felt it was spot on. Great job!
plainmnmemy chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I abaolutely loved it! They were both so witty and in character and just like w the show they were so close to just crossing that friendship line!
Salkri Kachemench chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Aww I loved this, she will NEVER give that jacket back if she knows what's good! :) Skye is so adorable
MarvelFan63 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I really enjoyed your story. I especially liked Skye's answers to Grant when he told her to strip and again when he said he would meet her in the back seat. I can totally see her answering like that. Very cute!
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