Reviews for Player One, Game Start!
GodudamaMaker chapter 10 . 7/5
This really is the most realistic harem fic I have seen yet, can't wait to see more on their relationships!
Ashkan Dehno chapter 7 . 6/9
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
DreamWeaverGod chapter 11 . 5/25
Oh...great...here comes asshole number 2...kill him pls...
Sl chapter 11 . 5/20
Stop Uzume plz
Blaze2121 chapter 11 . 5/18
Oh oh uzume fall to dark side again can Alex stop it oh boy next chapter will really have us at the edge of our seats for what’s coming next honestly kinda want kaurasuba in a Maid outfit fir one it be in a weird way adorable and sexy and kasahana appear yay and Mia was challenge in the scary department oh nice and yea calling out the hand holding was nice loved that bit would find it funny if Alex some how ends up with shina by accident but then again he would suffer uzume cosplay wrath the ... horrors he would endure but imagine it him in a animal suit playing with ku adorable anyway super hoping Alex picks up on uzume problem before it’s to late next chapter the plot thickens.
Lordgoth chapter 11 . 5/18
Eh. Ok chapter. I don't like Uzume is being blackmailed again when Chiho is not even her ashikabi.
gpno14 chapter 11 . 5/18
I'm happy to read a new chapter and hope that you and those you care for are staying healthy in these bad times. I can't follow what is happening on your patreon page, but as long as the story will continue here too I'll always look forward to more. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sl chapter 10 . 3/27
More chapters its so good
SkeletalPheonix chapter 3 . 3/7
Kidnapping alex was a really bad idea...
Doctor G chapter 10 . 2/28
Good story so far. But I'm surprised you only have 8 chapters made through 6years... Anyway, it's very good and I love the MC and how he's treating his girls. I especially love Uzume and Saki. Best girls around in this fic. Also, I'm hoping that Karasuba isn't some type of Yandere. How broken does a Sekirei need to be to try and kill the Ashikabi they're reacting to? She's more broken than Akitsu for sure. Anyways, keep up the good work! :D

Ja Ne~!
Doctor G chapter 5 . 2/27
Akitsu is waaaay too territorial. Also, why didn't Benitsubasa make the argument "If you kill me just because I'm reacting to him, then he'll start to fear you and hate you." Like, it's quite a valid argument and quite easy to see, so I don't see why she didn't tell her that. Anyways, I hope Benitsubasa *does* become apart of his flock. She's awesome and deserves some love! It also helps since we seem to see that Player One is also reacting to her. I'm assuming the guy is a Sekirei-Human Hybrid if not just a full on Sekirei. Anyways, good work so far but you're starting to making me dislike this story with how Akitsu is. Also, another thing, I'm pretty sure Akitsu always started her sentences with "Ah... [Add following sentence]." But other than that, it seems good so far.
The beginn of Red Dawn chapter 10 . 2/18
In six years only 10 chapter... sorry im out.
Blaze2121 chapter 10 . 1/28
First off I just binged this from 12 am to 7 am and I loved this worth losing some sleep gotta say this by far is my favorite oc Sekirei story I’ve read a few but this actual feels like it could be canon plus love the fact uzume joined his flock she and Chico might not have to go through the pain of separating like in cannon which begs the question in cannon uzume was winged by Chico the day they met so is the fact Alex their cause her not to do that as a butterfly affect or this a good old case of a what if uzume waited type deal ? but seriously he katosabra( can’t spell it re) their interaction make things interesting also that princess part just made me curious if he’ll some how her into a dress in the future oddly enough I ship it plus with his origins being so unknown chances are things about get fun anyway so far his current flock feels balanced honestly the only other Sekirei that could join would probably be Kazehana my reason mostly being that due to Minaka being interested in Alex would lead her to also being curious about him that or the wild blond he met now that be a chapter in half plus water meets Ice how would that fight go one can dream welp next chapter Mia time can’t wait to see how that goes keep up the amazing work.
ShadowKing042 chapter 8 . 12/31/2019
Yay with Uzume winged to Alex her canonical death has hopefully been avoided
ShadowKing042 chapter 7 . 12/31/2019
Oh god I always forget the Chiho arc, also the two have a sisterly bond
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