I love the way you write. Your word choice is spectacular and emotional and makes me feel for the characters. As an aspiring writer, it's something I appreciate. I know I just reviewed your other story, but that one was also wonderful so I figured I'd check for others since good FF writers are hard to find. And you didn't disappoint. Sorry if that came off as weird. Kay, bye.

i applaud your jelsa story! it's really good, don't let anyone tell you otherwise!

oh my god I love love love please update :)

Looks like you've got a highly promising start here! I will be interested to see how the story progresses from here!

YOOOOO this is so good! First off, WTM and the 1975 are awesome bands lol, but the way you portray the tension between them is so good, and the mention that Jack stands for everything Elsa's father would disapprove of made my heart go pitter patter lol.

GASP I REALLY LIKED THIS! Too bad it's just a one-shot, I want Elsa to see him again! BUT I STILL LOVED THE ENDING.

doood this is awsm

pls write more plsssss