Reviews for Rhythm
Stella chapter 17 . 3/4/2017
Is this completed or is it still ongoing? Because if it's ongoing, I would love to know what happens next!
Guest chapter 17 . 3/23/2016
This was incredible and you need to write more Loki stories pronto
PenArt chapter 17 . 3/21/2016
Wow wonderful story! :D
First time I say that but please update soon!
Guest chapter 17 . 3/11/2016
WAIT IS THAT IT? FINISH! EPILOGUE! EXPLANATION! SOMETHING
Guest chapter 17 . 2/14/2016
PLEASE DONT TELL ME THIS IS THE END. The story isn't marked complete, nor is there any hint of an end in your Author's Note, but it has such a sense of finality to it that makes me almost unbearably sad. I love this story and how you word it. I have NEVER seen Loki in such a perspective before and it's beautiful and refreshing. Please don't make this the end! I will never find any story that even comes close to this one.
Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 chapter 17 . 12/1/2015
is there going to be anymore because it is good so fare
Jenna chapter 17 . 10/22/2015
IS THIS THE END?!
Guest chapter 17 . 9/13/2015
Oh gosh, what a great story! I hope it's not the end!
I've never given a prompt before, but...here goes! What about dark/Avengers!Loki successfully "getting" the good/non-dark girl (or person/you) - not in like an M-rated way, but a romantic way all the same - because he knows that she/you love him? That whole battle between light and dark with him has always fascinated me!
LRRH17 chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
This is an amazing story! I can totally put myself into it - and then when you mentioned Little Lion Man, it was like the final indication that this really could be me. :) Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!
Cassodembreankia chapter 17 . 9/7/2015
Please tell me this wasn't the end! I'm hugely curious to know what happens next! I want to see if Loki ever kisses "you/me/her/etc"! I love this story so much. It's always so lyrical and rhythmic and it always has me on edge for what's going to happen next! Also the balance of humor to serious is amazing! I'm very much in love with this plot and your writing style. Please tell me this isn't the end!

~Cass
Veronika Dragulia chapter 17 . 9/6/2015
What a gorgeous story!

Beautifully written, intense, deep and psychologically complex without being overburdened... I've enjoyed this immensely!

Thank you so much for sharing. )
LadyManticore101 chapter 17 . 9/6/2015
Dang, though seriously awesome! ! ! I totally love this story! Please tell me it's not over yet!
Sarah chapter 17 . 9/6/2015
Wow. Absolutely amazing. I've followed this story since the beginning and just wow. You've spent a lot of time on this, and that's really commendable. I see lots of people who try to pump out a chapter a day but this has developed over a long time and matured so well. The end totally caught me by surprise- it felt almost abrupt, but in a realllyyyy good dramatic way. Without it being awkward or just ridiculous, you wrapped it up well but with enough edge of mystery to leave room for more if you ever wanted or for people's imagination. You also wrote loki very well without making some overly ridiculous and cliche fanfic "heres a bunch of reasons why you should be sorry for him and forgive him for everything!". You recognized the complex feelings and still had little points that showed his ruthlessness that you had to just register in your mind "yeah thats still the dick loki". Awesome. I probably felt a lot more of a connection to this because the reader character was a lot like me. I felt really involved in this story- it was pretty exciting! Living my would-be superhero-verse through your words. :)))
Guest chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
This story is DEFINITELY worth your time. I can tell you work hard on this. I don't even like reader POV stories, and yet somehow this one has not only been on my radar, but become one of my all-time favorite stories. And it's not even finished! You go, girl/boy/other! (Not meant as offensive, just don't know anything about you at all which is completely ok)
LadyManticore101 chapter 16 . 7/28/2015
This is such a great story! I mean really great! You have inspired me to try to write my own character x reader fanfic. Don't worry, I'm no copy cat, your plot is yours ;)
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