Reviews for The Return of a Demon |
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![]() ![]() You know, you really need to finish this unless you want a vengeful little sister hunting you down... XD love, Sophie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and can't wait for another update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kurama's back! I was fangirling the whole time as I read the parts with him in it :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good plot idea. It's very refreshing to read a plot that has the detectives involved in Harry's life after the books when he's grown into an adult. I think you have a great story here and I'd love to read more. Especially now that I know Kurama isn't dead! :D Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() Great job becca! Amazing story and great writing. You have great potential... I just wish you could come up with chapters a bit faster... Bit overall great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NAARRRRRRRRRRRRRR MORE PLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ((So... Kurama ATE his dream? Will you explain that to me? How would that work? I'm really curious.)) Excellent question! I really enjoyed reading your thoughts on how it could be possible. :3 I like to believe that you're right in that dreams are a mixture of the memories and imagination of one's subconscious. In a way, using spirit energy takes a great deal of imagination, for you have to visualize yourself using this sort of invisible, nearly intangible... thing. Knowing that, we can assume dreams are made by using a human's natural spirit energy (be it powerful or weak). Though its the memory side of things that make dream eating so particular and rare. He doesn't extract the memories so much as he extracts the spirit energy (because eating thoughts and memories would be a whole different level). So Hiei was only half right in that Kurama 'eats' dreams. In actuality he pulls at the spirit energy emitted from a person as they dream (much like the orb would pull at a child's soul), thus pulling apart the dream itself. It's very tricky to do, and maybe sometime in the story Kurama might explain to us how he obtained such an ability. But for now, Hiei's too obstinate to explain anything properly. w |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story as always. It is truely wonderful. I like the unique idea of mixing magic and energy together. So... Kurama ATE his dream? Will you explain that to me? How would that work? I'm really curious. Is the process sort of like Gouki and the orb? I mean can Kurama extract memories and then eat them, does he go into a person's subconsciousness and eat it from there, or something totally different. Dreams are also little more than memories, thought, and the human imagination mixed together. So theoretically, could Kurama also eat thoughts and memories? This is a really interesting, and I would love to find out your thoughts about how these things might work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you've done an excellent job writing this out and I'm stunned that this isn't more popular! I honestly think no one could have done a better job writing this than you have. This story is gripping and a wonderful read. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! It's original, fun, touching! I hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're writing is excellent. As always. Your transitions and flow is marvelous. I have a feeling that Yusuke and Kuwabara will always be kids at heart and will never grow up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is getting more interesting and mysterious as you go along. I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Please update soon and keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story and can't wait for the next update. |