I loved it, but "Mary's slender figure covered with curly dark brown hair" makes it sound like she had a hairy back or something o. O

Oh, please update now! I'm becoming very impatient! Plus, I'm addicted to Mary and Bert. 3 3 3

Please update now! I'm completely addict to Mary and Bert!

Loved it, simply loved it!

Oh my gosh. Not codfish. Ehehehe. I love this

Love the story so cute

Nice story. I really enjoyed it. In all honesty however, your presentation of the story could use a little spiffing up. As in proper capitalization and such, nothing major though. Still, your characterization of Mary and Bert is very believable. I will read more if you write anymore. And if you ever need help proofreading your stories I may be of some help. Cheers.

I really liked this one :) Actually i've always believed Mary Poppins was a little provocative sometimes. Like she likes to be desidered. That scene perhaps is a little out of hand, but it's really well written, funny and thought very gracious. Love it!

Hahaahah that is just hilarious :D
I just can imagine his facial expression when she walks out of the bathroom :P