Reviews for Double Pride, Double Trouble |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly, hands down think this is one of (if not the best) of the modern pride and prejudice fanfictions. I wouldn't even question this as a romance novel somewhere in a book store. The characters are so fleshed out, it feels like you get to truly know these people. The change from perspective from one to the other is seamless and really great, you never have to guess who is thinking. The girls are written brilliantly - they do not feel childish nor too adult. I love that all the sisters have grown from the tropes so often seen (Lydia is only stupid or Mary only studious and annoying or Kitty is forgotten entirely etc.). I also am a big fan of your Jane and Charles, as of course she is nice but also has a spunk and sends the girls to meet in the first place. I adore that you have both Darcy relations (Georgiana and Richard) as LGBTQ, I feel it contrasts really well with how the crazy aunts (Catherine and Anne) were stuck in the past. Also that Georgiana still lives with them, I personally thought she probably didn't want to abandon her brother and niece, nor would her aunt have tolerated her having a girlfriend (Headcanon or something). I have read this whole thing twice now (at least), and I am kind of sad to have finished it. Lots of love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Tiring history many irrelevant details. You talk a lot about Mina and leave Rose aside in history, another thing I do not agree with is the attention you give to a 14-year-old child, please, she's just a child, she should be making new discoveries with her sister. instead of dating. It's a shame ... her story had a very good start, but it got boring and tiring. I stop reading here. |
![]() ![]() I am feeling sad because its ending of this wonderful story. Your writing is amazing and i really enjoyed it reading as soon as you posted it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() Did you possibly mean freshly baked "kanelbullar" along with the salmiakki caramels? Because cinnamon buns (as google translate calls it) is found in most cafes in Sweden as far as I know. I love your story, thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us readers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will miss this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing and the ending was lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I can't believe it almost over. Thanks again for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m totally into & enjoying the story Please just enjoy writing it as we enjoy reading Only word that still sticks to me this chapter that bothered me a bit was your use of “ consternation” which I hope you meant just to be surprised but it has such a negative connotation that it seems that Adele was not welcome to be part of the passing out of gifts like her cousins, though you seem to convey that integrating Lydia and Adele into the fold by including them throughout the story. I hoped astonishment; astonished, pleasantly surprised might replace on your final edits Thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad your Lydia is so much better away from her parents. It seems like a lovely Christmas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter and the gift. Thanks again for sharing your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even I never expected that type of Bennet-parent behavior. Good for Lizzy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter Jesus piece of work MrMrs Bennet are I was glad Elizabeth sent them packing. Thanks again for sharing your story. |