this is great and I cant wait for the next chapter

Kearon is so cute! I have 4 brothers one older the rest younger (8,7,3) I love the fact that Daryl is so protective of Keila. Can't wait for more.

I knew it! Anyways great chap. I like what you said about their relationship growing as they grow I admire that in a writer. I hope to see more soon!

Love it so far I like the connection between the Dixon's and the kids it shows that side of them you don't get to see until around the third / fourth season. I also liked how Daryl stayed with her while she was hurt, maybe we'll see more affection between them at the cdc or maybe you will have Kelia get taken as well as Glenn when they get the bag of but only time will tell, I can not wait for an update to get an answer to all of these maybes!

Nice! Close one with that walker! And just saying, I would totally still be scared of spiders and gross bugs... I can't help it. Don't get me wrong, zombies would scared the crap out of me and I would probably be dead. But spiders... They are scary too! Haha update soon!

I like how they were brought to the camp with the original characters from the show, thats cool ) I understand how you don't need to go into as much detail for this part, we already know what it looks like haha

It was pretty good for being your first walking dead fanfiction! I liked it, the only thing I would say is that I feel like it was a little rushed like it was happening really fast. Unless you planned it like that because of all the walkers and danger and stuff, thats understandable. Good job, keep writing! D