Slim in love with this universe. Which is amazing because I didn’t think I could take a one piece ncis crossover seriously. But I lam be your characterizations and the storyline is great. If you ever feel like revisiting this series, I will definitely be first on board.

I am nothing but impressed, everything so far has been wonderfully well-written and planned out, and as always, I am absolutely in love with the relationship between Ace and Luffy, mainly. Of course I like Sabo joining in as well, but still. Acelu is always ‘priority’ number 1, or rather, the centre of my attention perhaps?

Anyways, I also want to tell you that I can feel that this story has a lot of potential, and that I will be waiting for the closure for Skid Marks, just as I did for Burning Rubber...no matter how long it may take, because that is how much I love your story, both the actual masterpiece and the sequel (having as much potential as the ‘original’ itself). Thank you so much for coming up with this, and publishing it!

Much Love,
Shellina

AAHH YOU ADDED BARTY! gotta love him. I'm following this story just in case you decide to update it. I really like this first one. binged it in a few days

So, I've added this story to my favorites just on the off chance you will someday-hopefully-update it c:

I hope you continue this since I really enjoyed the first one!

Did not think you would be able to do Bartolomeo in this context, but you pulled it off!

This is sooo wrong is right... I love it. I dont want to sound pushy but please update? I'm in love with your writting style.

These are adorable!
This chapter from Bartolomeo perspective is also adorable.
Nice way of bringing the conversation off the two brothers.
He is mostly wrong in his observation and that is somewhat hilarious.
Keep up the good work. I would love to see more soon!

this was such a good chapter thank you!

I know nothing of NCIS but I love your crossover so much! I've binge read it between classes and clubs the last several (?) days and I can't get enough.

For your question, I call my friends weird stuff all the time, haha. My brother is "broski", and I call my friends anything from Captain to deerling. One calls me "her boo" after Mario Boos, too.

I like your story a lot . Love how you write your stories. You write really good. Love ace and you write him really good . In both this stories and burning rubber. I hope you write more one piece stories. I love ace and luffy brotherly bond I love you writing. I can't wait to read more

How cute. Rooster has a man crush.

OMG BARTOLOMEO? HOW DID YOU KNOW I LOVE HIM? And even if its not him I'm still fascinated, in the beginning I almost thought it was Hancock before I noted the 'he'... :P Whoops:) Anyway, so glad for the update, suitably protective! Does this mean more Zoro? I hope so, I'm fascinated with this AU

Have I ever called a friend something weird? Does my sister count? Because if she does, I've called her so many weird things I can't even remembe half of them. We used to call her 'monsterbeast' a lot when she was little.
Also, OMG. You updated this thing. I love you so much, you know that?

Bartolomeo is a stalker. We can all agree to this. I just hope Luffy decides he's an entertaining stalker because if Gibbs gets involved, and if Gibbs decides he's a threat, he will never see the light of day again. Probably because he'll be buried alive under a dog-pile of protective friends/family members and suffocate. Just saying.