Fixed it! Sorry for the inconvenience!

I loved this! Short, very sweet, and very well written. You've kept them in character so well too. And, you didn't have to crank it up to an M-rated fic to make it wonderfully romantic. Kudos!

I did really enjoy this and I understand you had problems with this regarding you posting/updating it. I had similar problems as I copy and pasted my story. You may have to upload it again by a file upload instead. Other than this I really really really adored it :D I love this pairing and how you portrayed them. Awesome job, very well done

Sorry about that, I'll fix it.

yo um idk if it was the way you uploaded the fic or something but there's like no paragraph breaks and you might want to fix that, cause otherwise this fic is pretty hard to read

Nice.

But space out your lines. It was difficult to read through all this in just one paragraph. Made my head hurt a bit.

aww very cute