Excellent presentation of Hans' subconscious.

Aww, this was very well written much better then i can do.

Wot

truly incredible ..
I've been trying helsa fics myself but ofc not as good as yours though _
I'm waiting for AFTERMATH 3

I believe you are in fact one of the best Helsa writers out here. Such an incredible oneshot. You always manage to capture Hans and Elsa so good.

Thrilling, imagination-gripping, and written in that lovely descriptive style of yours. Great piece D

*coughs* *coughs* threesome? seriously?

though...i do like the almost alternate ending when he kissed Anna back to life, NOT when Elsa came into the picture...that was...weird.. .
But i'm glad it's a dream in the end. Poor poor Hans. I have mix feelings in this chapter.

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brilliant. dark. needs a sequel. :) you're work is flawless as ever except for ME ALWAYS NEEDING MORE OF IT ! I'm loving this dark side of elsa, you can do a spin off where she's not forcing him but actually seducing .. and he struggles because : she was put in jail after capturing her from the ice castle .. she wants to get out.. knows hans's plans .. but seduces the shit out of him till she escapes .. I would like to see some kind of emotional and physical need , as in she returns to him after she fled..just for more .. because she enjoys .. and he is under her spell