Damn. Kinda shocked but damn was it nail biting. Great job! :)

Your a great writer you should write a novel

Great story thank you for writing it!

I LIKE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

D-A-M-N! FOUR IS FUCKED UP!

though author, you did great. I know you will enjoy writing more stories.

I honestly didn't like the story. too dark.

Wow, such a Yandere Four u wrote in here. Don't know what Yandere means? Ah well. Ur an amazing writer!

I had a feeling Four didn't die

With brown hair and blue eyes, is Kilian Four's son?

Interesting way to end it. I like that you left it open to potentially come back. Not what I was expecting...

I hate these kind of endings...always leaves you wanting more...geez I thought 4 was gone for good...good job!

Wow! That was great. I have really enjoyed your story. Sorry to see it end but all good things eventually do. Hope you do get a chance to do a sequel sometime! :-)

Thank you for the update, and closure to the story. Wishing for an epilogue!

I really don't think an epilogue is needed my dear. By all means I will read it...but if you are truly out of steam for this story I must say you ended it perfectly and truly brought it full circle with the title showing through brightly.

As for the remainder of this chapter I'm happy that Eric never lost faith in Tris...through her coma and through her mental/physical rehabilitation. I love that though she didn't say it he knew what she meant.

I also loved that Max became a father figure to both Eric and Tris.

Kuddos.