When will the story continue?

Well finally got to the latest CH and so far I have to say this one is better than 2 other noteworthy YJ/40K crossovers for multiple reasons.

1st You allow him to use his gear over s**t given to him be the JL.
2nd The lack of chaos. In the other 2 "famous" crossovers chaos seems to replace the canon baddies plot focus wise early on, you however didn't and made sure the canon baddies still had their part to play.
3rd You make it seem logical with the plot twists you have in here. What with every time he kills the JL has to swallow crow despite some wanting to "arrest" him for it.

I do have some questions however.

1st What happened to the vehicle he arrived in? Why hasn't he repaired it or salvaged it to make his own " theme vehicle"?

2nd After his posting in Seattle you make it seem like the JL rarely knows what he is doing there, so I am curious why didn't he try to find a way to improve humanity/himself with that lack of oversight? Since if they are not paying attention he could contact weapon corps or the US army with one of his spare guns on the written promise of them providing a few back with him along with royalty rights for the weapon and finally a team of lawyers to help defend when the JL turns on him?

3rd Why didn't the JL give him a powered down version of his las-gun, since DC earth has numerous energy weapon tailored to different settings wouldn't it be easy for them to make a non-lethal version of the IMP Las-gun?

4th Why wasn't there ever a aftermath CH with Barbara or Gordon talking about what your OC did at the school or them curious about him?

5th What's his thoughts on the various lantern corps powers, does he view it as sorcery or mutant powers? Cause I had a thought of how much butt he could kick if he had a ring of his own like a blue or red ring.

My friend, comrade, amigo. You got me in a 40K mood. The grim darkness of the far future saturated my iPad pretty good, and I’m looking at 40K stuff again, I want a Catachan knife, I’ll hunt down anything, anything. The Death Korps of Krieg reminds me so much of the Deviljho from Monster Hunter. Chasing down anything until it’s dead then go for the next thing, over and over again. Ultramarines are the Emperor’s Boy Scouts and the Space Wolves are a bunch of space vikings who are also werewolves. So, in all, thank you, this was a great story to read and get me back in my Comissar scowl.

I'm gonna be honest I came into this story because of what inspired it expecting a bad ass inquisitor to fuck this universe up establish the god emperor as the only true God and be a general bad ass got to chapter two found the story incredibly slow and boring making me skip the first chapter then read the reviews and saw the "badass" inquisitor is turning into a non killing xeno loving heretic and lost all faith in this. Good luck in what ever the hell direction you're going but this doesn't feel at all like Warhammer

But actually when/if he dies, it could be interesting to see what ivy does. I mean, she could hear about what happened, realize that’s she had been doing this and then want to stop it and in doing so become a hero or something similar in idea. Or, the same realization could cause her to rebound and become depressive and broken.

Bro, wtf, is this capture the flag. Don’t do my man Birch like this. He has more death flags than a newly introduced character in Overlord.

Cadia stands

From the looks of the poll It seems that the Dante will be clapping some green xeno cheeks, it feels weird to write that but also hilarious. Great stuff and I'm liking how the team is warming up ever so slightly to Dante and his methods.

“ In addition to his standard modified H&K Mark 23 tranquilizer pistol, Dante had a new AK12 that came equipped with the same modular shotgun attachment he used during his mission to the Auction only this time the shells would contain either a high powered taser or a simple birdshot shell. Finally there was the MGL 1S with a removed stock.”

Okay, so Dante is a pure pragmatist for all intents and purposes and a loyal servant to the Emperor...

How much money is he wasting on replacing his weapons so often? Why does he modify them to be no lethal only? Why does he use plastic bullets when they have the same lethality in practice when rubber bullets exist? Why DOES he get a new set of armaments every deployment when he could just use a lasgun on low charge and be set for the entirety of his time on DC Earth because of las batteries being so utterly god tier and OP?

I love this story and I poke holes in it because I want it to improve.

Kinda hoping for Dante and Megan now that I reread everything. I really think it would be a good chance for character development for both. Like Tali or Liara from Mass Effect, kind, intelligent, and eventual badass. Update when you can.

Keep up the great work

I have finished reading all the chapters and I have loved this fic, I liked the development of the team it will be interesting to see how the leadership of the inquisitor prepares them for what is coming, regarding the pairing of Dante, it is seen that Miss Martian is going to winning (personally I think it's great) it seems that dante is going to go through a fairly large character development (how lucky he is not of the ordo xenos eh) for those who think that this would be impossible we must remember that he is not yet an inquisitor He is an apprentice, of course he has seen more death and conflicts than anyone in the league but I see that over time he will end up getting along better with megan.
One more thing I see that they are already in the episode where superboy gets the wolf and it seems like a good opportunity to give the inquisitor a pet of his own like a 2-headed eagle (like the 40k Psyber-Eagle or just a giant eagle), something that will be familiar from his universe.
but well I don't know if you've already signed the next chapter or if it's not what you are looking for but there is that idea if you are interested, keep it up you are a great

Well the poll is 50% in favour of Miss Martian so the people have decided

Also it's not like it won't be interesting, Dante is going to have to go through some serious character development and at least one mental breakdown in order to accept his own feelings

I think Dante ain’t gonna get paired with any of the cast provided. He is a Inquisitor for one, and another is that all those present are some form of unclean individual in the eyes of the Imperium. Artemis is the only one who might become paired with him but that’s unlikely as I think he ain’t interested in anyone for a while, maybe if you create a new female character for him would be best if your dead set on getting him laid.

And so we shall have a heretical xeno romance

Get your Love Can Bloom references ready boys