Great story please continue, please update soon

Omegaderose, actually Gai's team is just called team Gai. Nowhere in the manga or the anime is there a single mention of team 9. So while 99% of fanfiction writers assume his team was originally called team 9 and write something about it still being in circulation, that is completely non-canon.

team 9 is Guys team IDIOT

I can't wait for more chapters of this fan fiction, it is a very good read and hope for an update soon.

Oh come on! You haven't updated in years! I like this story a lot and wonder how strong Naruto and Yami become. Also, what about their talk with sarutobi jiji? Because their training is somewhat done will they tell him about it? Who else might end up in his small harem? Sasuki might be a good idea. She wants someone strong and doesn't like to lose. That and Naruto might be the only other person who could see her as herself and not the last uchiha like a lot of others. What do you think?

the story is strange but interesting too.

Porfa actualiza pronto

first off this is one hell of a good story in my opinion and second off when will it be updated ?

nice keep the story going I like it

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why have you not been updating this awesomeness?

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Never understood, naruto forgives the villagers, or just ignores them.. THAT'S WONDERFUL... he is SUCH A GOOD PERSON (rolls eyes)... then tell me exactly what's to STOP THEM? ...How is their behavior BAD if they are not STOPPED?,, Also what's to stop them from harming any CHILDREN that naruto has? They've already PROVEN they don't have a problem hurting kids! NOR DO THEY CARE IF THEY ARE GUILTY OR NOT... So tell me mr. HERO what's to stop them if NARUTO doesn't?.. You see? You can say.. "aww forget the villagers".. or "I can forgive them".. BUT WHAT DOES THAT ACCOMPLISH?... It teaches them NOTHING.. and they will heap hate on you later or your kids... Because they have learned NOTHING... Teach them to FEAR then your kids are safe.

I'm not sure here, without the YANG energy of the fox flowing into him constantly, he WOULDN'T be the loud, obnoxious naruto we have known, we wouldn't YELL his sister's name as there is NO REASON to do so, and even though he is young, he doesn't have fire/life flowing through him anymore... SO.. TONE IT DOWN. He's NOT a ball of energy anymore... he's like EVERYONE else.. SHE has his ENERGY... get with the program of your own story.

Never understood explanations... why have them?... To the reader.. I guess they're ok.. but characters?.. WHY?.. Yeah they want answers.. guess what?.. LIFE doesn't give those... You wanna know WHY?.. ask a buddist or a priest... your gonna get the same answer... Nobody KNOWS why, and they shouldn't... authors need to quit EXPLAINING stuff, nobody gets that, nobody gets a "users manual" IRL.. so stop handing them out, and nobody gives a SHIT about back-story... in fact if it was happening to YOU, would you care about something that happened 200 years before you were BORN?... So NOBODY CARES.. he's got powers?.. WONDERFUL.. NOW WHAT DO WE DO WITH IT.. Who the hell cares were they came from. Does Tsunade have the wood release?.. NO.. Will any kids?.. MAYBE... does naruto have CHAKRA CHAINS? (not at this point)... WILL HE.. (yes)... it's all a crap shoot... anyone can grab ANY power, if it's SOMEWHERE in their dna... No wonder that kisamie is treated normal (he's BLUE with gills and shark eyes).. nobody CARES ANYMORE... "you look weird".. "oh just a bloodline"... ignored... yet they have a problem with demons?.. see a slight hypocrisy here? Where exactly do you think these "bloodlines" came from?... natural mutation?.. then why so many and why do humans still exist? WHAT"S REALLY FUNNY if you look at even bloodline users calling the sharringan the "cursed eyes"..If you are CURSED by demons?... ROFL.. YOUR FUCKED.