just slightly disturbed but thats ok please update!

this story is really different from other LJ fics i have read and from what i imagine... but different is good. but still, WHY ARE YOU BEING SO EVIL AND MAKING LILY ACT LIKE AN UNCARING BITCH? but, i know that she will change, so please update and show us how!

oh it so good. i really wish you would update.

Please, tta! Go on! I just wanna see more of this story!

why not do a chapter in Lily's POV? that would be pretty cool.

Great fic! This is a nice change from most L/J love/hate fics... can't wait to read more!

I guess my earlier, LONG, review didn't come out. Stupid ! *Kicks it* why can't anything ever WORK for once! Am I asking too much or something? Hmph! Anyway ... re-read the chapter and it's so awesome and I want u to get back here and CONTINUE! Really what else can I say? But oh my god! Lily is such a cow! How CAN she get herself some random, trampy boyfriend when the obvious love of her life is right IN FRONT OF HER? *Glares* oh well, they've both got to get together, now don't they? :P that's what I love about L/J stories. You KNOW for a fact that they're gonna end up with one another but the question is how! Your story is soooo unpredictable! I just so totally don't know what's gonna happen and how L/J are gonna get together! I mean Lily is just so BLIND for one -_- *Sighs* poor Jamie-poo :'[ how can u make him go through this? *Glares at author and chases her with a keyboared* GET BACK HERE AND WRITE FLUFF, ALREADY!

*whacks tta not-so-gently over the head with an iron bat* YOU CRUEL, DEMENTED GIRL! DO YOU HAVE SOME SORT OF SICK PLEASURE IN SEEING ME IN PAIN? *glares*

UNcheers,

~Lanti~

Great story! Never read another one like it!

Can't wait for the next chpater!

Hi, this is ifonlytonight from LJ! :D Just thought I'd let you know I read it all. I like this chapter the best, but like it all lots :)

Yes, I do think. Now my lips got this sore patch on it and ... what is it with this story! I might have to stop reading it just to stay healthy! But it's too good, so it's tough luck for me.

Awww poor James *sobs*

Every other fic I read made him a heartless bastard but here he's so adoreable! *sigh dreamily* now I love him a tiny little bit more than Sirius...

Please din't take too long to update... I'll just... die!

See you at LJ

Daisy

oo i like it! james and lily are almost exactly how i imagined them! yay! james is a lot like harry which makes me love him even more. this flows really well. its almost poetic, the way you write it, which is great for someone who speaks english as their first language, not to mention second! i feel sorry for poor james! i hope she isnt *too* mean to him for much longer. ive never read a james/lily fanfic before. im glad i have one now. hehe. dont keep me waiting too long for the next chapter!

AW! Thanks for replying to my review! That always makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside! ::again checks herself for sounding like a Hufflepuff:: Maybe I should just give up and BE a Hufflepuff, so I can stop having to checking my Ravenclaw self. On second thought, nah.

Again, I have this annoying little habit for rambling...I don't even know if I want to work it out and stop it...I at least should try...

Ok, back to bussiness, I liked this chapter. It was interesting to hear about James watching Lily snog some other guy. Merely because if it happened to most boys at his age they would have sprung up and torn them apart. Again with this sweetie business.

I still have found that males in school are total jerks...or is that just to me because I will NOT stand for any of their crap and rebuke them for everything they do wrong. I don't know...maybe being sassy and reclusive has its down points. Such as not being able to see much good amung 8th grade boys...

Well, I think that you have really gone in depth in James character and I salute you!

Please please please update soon!

The Minnesotan in England

marzoog

You really should keep going... That is if you want to live up to... say... next week. Cause I'm coming to bite your head off if you din't update in less than 8 days!

~Evil Furious Alya~