Great fic, learn to use punctuation

Irayo!
You have captured the love between these two beautifully. Neytiri is just such a beautiful soul, and Jake is in dire need for a loving soul to fulfill his life.
Your short, yet to the point story, has hit the mark exactly.
It is the medicine that both of them need, for both of their races / species to hopefully come together as one body under Eywa?
Kiyevame!