Yet another wonderful chapter. A few points though... Why in the world would Mal provide her father with any info?! And she thinks she's going to forgive him after that talk? If anything she should decide never to speak to him after his explanation. The Rumlow thing is worse than the HYDRA being bad one. Because the Rumloe thing is extremely violtating. Actually, she'd be better suited to forgive Rumlow than him because at least the guy started off not knowing her -though I still think she shouldn't even give him a chance. Her father though, someone who's supposed to protect her and be there for her. For him to help in such a violating plan for her. That's unforgivable. And she doesn't seem than disagreeing that she'll later forgive him and maybe even listen to Rumlow. You're still my father? She should've told him never to speak to her again.

So glad she's finally starting to realize all the lies, especially with her dad and Rumlow. There's do greater betrayal really. And I think you shouldn't have her ever forgive either of them no matter what. Also why would she feel that she still love him? Or that she should speak with her lying manipulative father? He lied once already.

Just found your story ) cant wait for their interactions

this story was just amazing!

I just finished reading this story and it's great! I hope you write a sequel and continue with it because I will be reading it if you do.

Looking forward to the sequel! So excited for it!

Okay, so I had a really long review all typed out and then it disappeared when I went to post it because I have internet troubles and I can't remember what I wrote. I will say that I absolutely loved this story! The plot was interesting, exciting and I loved the way you worked Mallory into the movie events. I loved Mallory, she was a great OC and I really liked the way that you wrote the canon characters. I particularly loved having Natasha play such a big role in the story and forming a friendship with Mallory! This was one of the best plots I have read on ! Brilliant story! :)

Hey! So I just found this story and read through it pretty good! There were parts that were a little dull, but j think you fit your OC into the world pretty well (although the missions where she went on had soft excuses for her to be there (from Peirce), I understand the literary purpose of her being present). I'd love to read more, especially something featuring Mal and James in a more romantic view, if you catch my not so subtle hint, lol!

Great story! I really liked that the romance (both Rumlow and the steadily growing intimacy with Bucky) didn't overwhelm the story, but that you had a focus on the mental trauma going on as well :) Looking forward to the update / sequel - no rush though, make it as good as this story was!

a thrilling story to read

I'm very excited for the sequel! Some short fics would not delightful! Can't wait to see what you write!

Yes! Please please please write little bits here and there! I loved this story so much, and miss your updates. I understand you wanting to wait for the next Avengers installment, but please give us a little something in the meantime! Love your work!

I'd love to see some short fics while I wait for the sequel. Thanks for updating us!

Please post mini fics!

Interesting keep going.