Reviews for Trepidation
Guest chapter 3 . 11/12/2017
Hiatus you mean abandoned? Lmfao
EmmaLeeBee chapter 4 . 12/7/2015
FRIEND! I hope you continue this soon, for real. I'm glad the others were able to talk you into keeping it going because you've got some really cool ideas going here. I love the route you've chosen to take as far as where the story could go within canon universe. (Which is saying a lot because I usually don't like pregnancy AUs bc I'm weird like that). But as far as the Corps being all but wiped out and Eren and Mikasa being literally all they have left... I don't know I guess I'm just a sucker for angst but I kind of like the desolation of it all.

I also at this point have come to really like your characterizations of everyone. At times at the beginning I was a little unsure of some of your choices (especially the first sexual encounter) for some of the characters, mainly Eren and Mikasa, but the more I read the more I could see where you were going with your intentions and those choices started to make more sense. I think you've just got some different takes on them that are still very much in character just nothing I'd really explored yet in fic worlds so it's kind of nice to get this perspective.

Overall you're just a really good writer with some awesome ideas and I'm glad you're writing them out! Looking forward to more soon. I'm excited to know what happens next! x)
3 Em
Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2015
How is Mikasa the only candidate "realistically and morally"? Historia (and Hanji) are there too.
notentirelyunliketea chapter 3 . 2/2/2015
Save Armin! My baby! This is really dark btw I love it
freak4zelda chapter 3 . 1/27/2015
oh. my. goodness.
This is so FREAKING SAD! IT WORKS WITH AOT BUT IT'S SO SAD!
Oh man. Everything is perfect, the characterization, the action, the descriptions...I have chills...
Holy cow, please update. Please please please, you are making my heart die over here!
Oh wow...this is amazing...
eleutheromaniac chapter 3 . 1/24/2015
Wow, this is such an interesting premise and now that Eren and Mikasa have left the walls, I'm really interested to see what path the story takes.

That last line of this chapter is gorgeous though and I honestly can't stop staring at it. It may be because it's literally the last line of the chapter (lol), but it also makes me nervous because I've grown attached to your portrayal of Armin. Here's to hoping that he chooses to go back to check on the remnants of the Survey Corps, haha

(I'm really curious as to how you develop Historia's character if you choose to keep her alive.)

Looking forward to you next update whenever you have the time to post it. I agree, distractions are everywhereee.
KatyGrace chapter 3 . 12/19/2014
Yes yes yes update! Sorry I read it when it was released but I forgot to review then bc I'm scrub

I told you most of what I liked about this story but again: painting the hopelessness and misery of SnK's atmosphere is what you do so well and I love it. Most ppl either shy away from the universe itself with AUs (which I'm fine with ofc but it's nice seeing in-universe fics too) and making the setting happy. It's nice to read something angsty for once (I haven't read much angst recently)

aRMIN BABE PLS love yourself because everyone else does. Also babes better reunite soon I wish Armin would be delivering that baby

okay ily bae and thanks for thanking me I'm all blushy - I hardly did anything! just spelling! but thank you so much for that and this chapter, looking forward to your next update!
KatyGrace chapter 2 . 11/28/2014
! Bruh I was no expecting the baby route. I really like your writing style and am gonna go read the snippets of Ch 3 you sent me.
This fic is so painful but it hurts so good?
KatyGrace chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
I can't believe Sasha and Jean and Connie and Ymir are all dead... and Erwin... not gonna lie I cried a little when you described Sasha's death. Powerful, sure... but fucking painful patbae dear god...
And holy shit this is really good and you are an excellent writer I can't wait to see more of this fic
nomnomnomcheeese chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
This was really good keeep up the good work
SoulsJacket chapter 3 . 6/2/2014
OMG I nearly had a heart attack on the last paragraph! Very well written, and my favorite! Keep up the good work!
trisha chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
you may complain as much as you want about the dub,because i agree it sucks!
and it is not "constant whining" if you only said it twice.I DONT LIKE THE DUB! I HAVE SAID IT TWICE AM I CONSTANTLY WHINING! anywho, im glad you finaly updated i love up the good work.
and if your still looking for names i just love the names cher,and soon 3
Sentinel07 chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
Would probably be easier to enjoy if you weren't such a whiner about the dub. I've seen every episode so far and it's pretty good. Guess some people can't understand that. Oh well.
Lucy chapter 2 . 4/30/2014
I LOVE IT
Trisha chapter 2 . 4/30/2014
Your story is fantastic keep writing,but as for the dub I agree 100% it's trash but yes i as well will watch it. I'm glad there are at least a few people that hate
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